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for Suffering

by Catalina

person Tinni
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Did I review this? I can't remember, anyway. Good chapter, so does this mean Arwen has been conceived? Will they finally admit their love for each other. Will that damn desk break and Celebrian end up seeing the letter? O please, please, please let the next cha be be a happy one. I think poor Elrond and Celebrian have suffered enough, I mean eight chapters is a long time.
person alena
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don't even know where to begin, with all the absolutely marvelous descriptions and the flow of words...Celebrían's talk with her father I loved especially; it was just so right on the mark in every way. And all the descriptions of the house in the yuletide season, Elrohir and Elladan, and the short but wonderful bit about Glorfindel...And the frozen layer of that awful poise of El and Brí. Gah.

The "kisses bestowed and granted by fëar locked behind lidded eyes" are beautifully romantic and heartbreakingly sad at once.
person Cassandra the Heart Nut
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good God, woman! You really know what you're doing! I love how you've brought Celeborn into the loop. Hopefully he'll get to the bottom of this soon and seese ese silly elfies straight! *~^* The tumble in the bed was quite vivid... were they really dreaming the same dream? That says a lot if they're so in tune with each other that this would happen. I hope beyond hope that this resolves when they wake up- it's screaming for resolve here! However, the angst just keeps going and going and going far longer than I ght ght it would. You have done an excellent job putting this into the relationship. It seems to be canon, it's so good, Losse. I eagerly await the next installment!
person kalurien
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*looks at you with EXTREME suspicion*

Beautiful, as always. :D
person Nessamelda
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved the descriptions of the Wedding Celebrations - and the banners. Perfect and so sad.

Your writing is just wonderful *huggles El and Bri again* :'(

The smut was wonderful (but it wasn't just a dream was it?)
person linweseregon
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If ever I felt like banging two elves' heads together it is now.
This is so well written, very much in the Tolkein style, well apart from the sex. Please keep writing and please make it a happy ending.
person Nemis
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Evilevilevilevilevilevil... *looks innocent* ;)
Wonderful tension-building in here, the conversation between Celeborn and Celebrían remains my favourite bit (I'm spoiled, what can I say?).
Every time you do it again, showing that the love between Elrond and Celebrían is there, and yet every time they come remotely near to confessing it they are both (usually) too stubborn.

Now I'm very interested how the two of them are going to be confronted with the results of this dream... *cough* ;)
Evilly good as usual. :D
person Rose Red
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, Hooded!Wet!Elrond... :D Very nice.
I loved the father-daughter time with Celeborn and Bri too. :)

Ah! Evilness! What are they going to do the next morning? Does this mean Arwen? *lil squee*

Great stuff as usual! :)
person Pandora
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMDE! I cant believe you left it at that!!!!! Please please pe wre write more soon! You have me on the edge of my seat.
person Amy-chan/Ereinion
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeeeee! [bouncebouncebounce] I can't wait to see the morning after! Will Celebrian wake first and accuse Elrond of rape? Will Elrond wake first and wonder what in the world they've done? Will they both realize that they do indeed love one another and that love is returned?!! Write!! [begs and offers up an Ereinion-clone as incentive]