rate_review Reviews

i think you should continue. im liking where its going.lol

your grammar is fine to me it doesnt bother me much. dont stop writinis iis is a great story so far i would love to see it finished!!!

Hi please don't worry about spelling 'american' or 'canadian'. i admit never really thought about that anyway, you're writing a really good fic so who cares? admittedly i'm english, lol. anyway i love your work and please please please continue *bedding on knees here*. i think it's very well written and enjoy your plot development and characterisations so please update :)

take care honey

huggs
louise

This is a pretty good story, my only complaint is the poor spelling and grammer. That can make even the best story not worth reading. You should get a be:) :)

Otherwise, keep it up. I'm looking forward to the rest.

I am very pleased somebody thought of this kind of story. Usually, you either get Aragorn and Arwen or Aragorn and Legolas. This is much more interesting and truly unique in its way. I like reading it and, unlike another of your readers, I find Aragorn's reactions much more acceptable in this instance. He is confused. And so he needs Arwen's guidance to do what's right, to save our beloved Legolas.

I hope you will continue, this is great.

OOOOOOOOOOO!!! I'm most definately liking this one. I also REALLY like how you didn't bastardize Arwen in this like so many others have. It makes it somehow more special that she was the one having to coax her mate into the threesome of sorts. I look forward to reading more of this... espescially if you make it nice and lemony!!! A good sex scene between two elves of ANY sex... espescially Legolas... and orn,orn, is a good thing. ^^ Keep it up ne? Namarie!

~Celesta Hellewise Harman

please continue, pretty good