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for breaking the ice

by peniel

person kiki
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes please more.I am so in love with your potrayal of Erestor.Please more.lol
person giggle
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just trying to get caught up after the flu and I love this story.
I think Rumil the naive, trusting chatterbox is just so sweet. And the background you have for Erestor is intriguing. I can't wait to see how this pairing works out.
Yes I think Orophin should have a pairing also. That way you can switch between lovers and that eternal dance of love.
I look foward to more. giggle
person V.T.
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing... is there any chance you could email me when the next chapter comes out? Whether it be by LJ, adultfanfiction.net, fanfiction.net or other means?
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great fic. I love Rumil and there are so few fics out there for him. I love how yor portray Erestor. This will be an interesting and delightful read. :)
person HHS
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!A different pairing for Erestor.Please do continue.I would love to see how Erestor will dwithwith Rumil's affection.
person HHS
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet heavens!!!Anotherr great story and a different pairing for Erestor.Please do continue.
person Lairewen
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice story, Rumil is a favourite of mine and I'm interested to see where this goes.
However, there are a few spelling errors/typos that ruin the flow of the story. Prehaps you need to proof-read before you post.
person Snuggs
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey i like this! I love Erestor in any story though so please be gentle with him. lol. Update soon please!
person H M
schedule January 31, 1920 at 12:00 AM
Orophin huh?How about with one of the twins?Please?