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for breaking the ice

by peniel

person Ghost-of-a-Rose
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh where to find the words! Brilliant! Magnificent! I wish it was not over! A sequel would be highly appreciated, if only to see the wedding of Rumil and Erestor. The couples are so perfect for one another. And the way you write, you go! I encourage you to write and write. You are talented with structure, plot, and dialogue. I not often leave reviews, unless the work is just so astounding. I just don't know how to relay how much this story touched and moved me.
person Setare
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I´m sorry that it is over now. I would have liked some more chapters, but I really loved the story. Thank you!
person keri
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story. Thank you! I enjoyed it very much.
person Twilight
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Had fun reading this story. Liked how you chose to be different by having Erestor and Rumil enjoy their newly acknowledged feelings etc, and wanting to take it slow. Nice to see how all of the Lorien brothers had found someone special in Imladris.
person Twilight
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those facial cuts must be painful, especially the one on Elladan's lip. Ouch! Elrohir is doing a good job of fussing over Orophin, and making sure that he gets the needed rest for his recuperation. The change in Erestor is more evident in his being less cool and reserved to others now.
person SuziQ
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just keeps getting better and better! I'm jumping in my seat waiting for more!
person martouf59
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please.Update soon.Been waiting for a while for it.Love this stoey.So please,more.
person Kim
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Elbereth,
Where do I begin. I LOVE this. I had tears streaming down my face reading every chapter. I cried - happy and sad tears, I laughed, or giggled like a child. I felt the love blossoming between the various characters felt the termoil of "what was thought to Be" unrequited love. I fell in love with all these characters myself and in writing this review my heart is full to bursting with love and compassion for all our lovely elves. Each chapter was perfection. Please, please, please add more chapters soon. Do Not give up on this. I look forward to reading other works by this author.
person giggle
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so sweet. Everyone seems to be working things out. giggle
person martouf59
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.How about elladan and haldir getting together.Both of them are the only ones single.