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Ah Celesta???

Can i have my screen back now?

I would like to read the new chapter?


Please??????


Great story - are we going to see some lemons in the bath????

Hi! I read a couple of sections of your story and although you aren't bad, there are some things...

Just wanted to let you know that you shouldn't write for the fans- you should write for yourself. Yeah, sure, it's great to know people really enjoy your work, but honestly, why should one have to write for other people? I personally don't give a damn how many people think something's wrong with my story- in fact, I'm so sick of my friends automatically telling me it's good (because they don't want to hurt my feelings) that I *wantmeonmeone to tell me what's wrong with it.

So maybe you should listen to the "flames" (which sound more like severe, yet constructive criticism to me). I'm not saying you have to like them, but some of them might have some helpful information.

And again, you really should write for yourself. It's a lot easier that way.

Navaer!

P.S. 'Anon' is also short for 'anonymous', so the anon who liked and the anon who "flamed" are probably two different people.

omg i love this story so far! (even though im only on the first chapter but thats not the point now is it? no its not) i love the way she acted! highly improbable but it was so funny it didn't matter. she was just so nonchalant about it. it was great. and she got to cuddle with leggy!!! if that happened to me...i think id die of sheer happiness! although she was in shock at the time, and probably had no idea what was going on but yeah. ok i'm going to stop rambling because i really wanna know what happens. btw: MARY SUES ROCK!! as long as they have a good plot. if there is no good plot then they suck and i hate them. but so far yours is awesome!!! it'll prolly get better as i read along...which im going to do now....

maria

btw...forgot to put this in my last review...could you email me telling me how to pronounce her full name. it'll bug me to no extent. thank you!!!! i love her humor btw...and she is a bit forward which i don't think you should curb one bit but the men might think she is arrogant etc (which i just realized that you show that type of thinking in boromir so ima gonna be quiet now)

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! At least it was a good chapter.... don't take so long next time!! Or else I'll... I'll, uh... do something reeeeally bad! Yeah, you heard me!

MORE. Now.

You know those flying keyboards you were ducking at the beginning of this chapter????!!!!!

The have now turned into flying screens!!!!!!!!

I am hanging on the edge of a knife - I false step and the fellowship will.......

hang on wrong quote.


Just write girl - I want more of this fabulous story!!!!!

Niiiiice, I am glad you had Asca stay. You following the book or the movie? If so you better noth ave her leave Lothlorien until the war is won. And when are you going to tell us if she's pergnant or not? You better tell us before Legolas leaves. And make sure you have Haldir get his head out of his a$$. Update soon! Namaarie.

Yihaaaaaaa

Yipeee

Well sort of...

Read your new chapter - great...

And now accoasionally the firewall lets me in to the story

Why it will let me into AdultFanFiction but won't let me into the work website, I don't quite know - BUT I'M NOT ARGUING!!!!!


Keep on writing!!!!

i love your writing but must you end it there and in that way???? lokking forward to the next chapter

its so sweet. i like this fic. write more!!! its so sad that they have to part but its understandable. she aint no zena, worrior princess. lol. i hope everything works out fine in the the end. and here's the ever common comment of "UPDATE SOON!!!"