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chapter 18 had quite an impact on me, thele nle nature of the fact that asca was sad cause legolas was going to have to leave her behind. reminded me about when i had to leave my closest and best friend because my family was moving. but the thing that hurt me the most was that i never got to say good-bye. however, this chapter and the song made me think that maybe it was best that i didn't get to say good-bye because true friendship never ends and for that fact there are no good-byes just good memories.(this was a poem that was sent to me that i think is sad but wonderful)
I wish you enough:
I wish you enough sun to keep your attitude bright.
I wish you enough rain to appreciate the sun more.
I wish you enough happiness to keep your spirit alive.
I wish you enough pain so that the smallest joys in life appear much bigger.
I wish you enough gain to satisfy your wanting.
I wish you enough loss to appreciate all that you possess.
I wish you enough 'Hellos' to get you through to the final 'Good-bye'.

this was anoter lovely chapter you did Celesta Hellewise Harman. don't ever stop writting and showing off that creative mind of yours.

>squeaks

This story has had me rolling with laughter, crying my eyes out-especially in this last chapter- and smiling so broadly that I had thought my face would get stuck like that forever...oh the horror, I could just see people staring and pointing, little kids going 'Look Mommie, that girl's face is stuck, haha, what a freak' alright so maybe not quite so crual. I do have a few suggestions though, you do what I find myself doing as I write, and that is using one word spelling once and then a different latter, for example you wrote affect then effect, but thats nothing-not to brag but half the time I spell does as dose, yep like a dose of meds, instead of he does...its the burnettness (hehe I am actually blonde, not that that is relivent) sorry babbling and unfortinet habbit. Other then that however your grammer is good, your story constion ion wonderful, and your feelings pure. Your the modern Jane Austin...well except for the fact ther cer characters would all be dead by now, and yours a quite obviously not. Anyway, I am so happy that you are not discouraged fromtingting this wonderful story even though you have recieved flames. It takes a strong person to take criticism into stride, and I am glad to read your story. It has touched my life as well as some of your other readers lifes-as you said yourself!- For one thing it made me more aware that not everything is flowers and pickles~sorry I love pickles and cheese so to translate that to you that means honky dory~ It also made me feel emotions that I have had bottled up for so long. Its goodcry cry every now and then and you have allowed me to do this and to laugh with great joy. Your character is in no way a Mary Sue...or if it is I wouldn't notice becuase I happen to like Legolas Mary Sue stories, after all doesn't the perfect elf deserve the perfect woman? I love nature to, and I am glad also that you have expressed yourself through your character, that is very important I believe, though I am no expert. I really enjoy this story, so much in fact that I am going to make it my homepage, YAY the first thing I see when I get on the internet. I can not wait to see what happends ........Oh wow this is a giant run-on paragraph. *hands you buckets of Cheese, Pickles, and a season passport to my future country-for I shall buy a country- called 'Pickles' and gives you a giant hug* Well I shall review again when you update if I get the chance! Yay!

Die, carpal tunnel! Aww, even if there WAS angst, twas a sweet chapter. I obviously look foward to the next installment. Better be quick about it ;)

Thank you for my screen back. It was worth it.

Now I have to explain why I almost started crying - at work - at my desk - when I am supposed to be working!!!!!!

Please keep up the feeling stuff - you cannot experience happiness properly if you have not experienced some pain.

More, please

Hey, amazing, few months ago I read the first two chapters of this fic and I was like, 'Damn, this is good!', kept coming back for a long while waiting for the fic to be continued, then I end up loosing access to the internet for a while and whadayaknow, 18 chapters! Keep um coming! This fic is amazing and amusing too I love it ! ^.^ Especially with her quick wit.::chuckles happily::putting Boromir in his place first thing, and then punching Haldir? Whoo! And her past, talk about dark and deep...so beautiful the way you've done it I can't wait to read more ^.^....>.>......amusing question though, Galadriel had said 'welcome home' to her, what did she mean by that, I mean, is Asca an Elf herself or am I reading too much into that? ::chuckle::wouldn't be the first time I've done that... anyway keep up work on the ficcy PLEEEEEEEASE, I really wanna know what happens

*so happy*
You made my week. I havent been online for a few days but reading your newly updated chapter made up for it. Can't wait for the following chapter. Again, a marvelous fic. I shall definetly check out your other fics soon. Later

this is a great chapter. i love it. you proportioned their love perfectly. i thought i was goin to cry!! ahaahaha. i was hoping for more than a lemon but this is great none the less. i hope u get the chance to write a new chapter and update soon. till next time.

i so know what you mean about the whole snuggling thing. its really hard for people to understand that you're not really flirting its just that you need constant contact with someone. i am truly sorry fort hat happened to you and your friends i hope that you all recover and are able to overcome it all. *big hug* i wish i had enough confidence to snuggle nude with people...mmm i need to work out more lol *applauds* < for another great chapter that i absolutly adored. i liked that statement about gandalf shouting to the mountain that it had won and they were leaving . it made me laugh and i got a strange look from my cat.

how/where did you learn to speak elvish? i love languages and would love to learn it but its hard to just learn from the books because there isn't enough of it. etc etc etc

i would just like to inform you that your story was so good that i have spent the last two hours readit ait and now my eyes are burning from looking at the screen this long and it is now five in the morning and and instead of getting ready to go to work i am giving up my precious hair blo-drying time to write this review for you! it was just that damn good! i applaud you! i love it all and i very eagerly await your next chapter. (this is gonna sound corny but im going to say it anyways) you have truly brightened my life by just writing this fic. i love middle earth with all my heart and i wish i was an elf not for the immortality or the beauty (those are just bonuses) but for the connection with nature. you have shown me that even a human can have that kind of connection. also its nice to read about how much those two love each other. it givves me hope. thank you so very very much. i love you! *wipes tear away* your forver faithful reader-maria