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for A Rose By Any Other Name

by Celesta

person AzureDragoness
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I suppose I could feed da ego... *cautiously throws a few morsels to a tiny little thing* ^__^ Anywho, I'm still heeeeeeeere, and I aint going! Now update, so I have something to come home to besides the hell of school.
person kirameki
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really sorry to hear about you and your friends. I don't mind you incorporating it into the story at all. In fact it would be interesting to see Legolas' reaction to it. I personally, have fortunately never been through anything like that, though a relative of mine has (it was a long time ago so I was really little and don't know much about it). It's one of the things I hate the most, ya know. I think you writing about it might even help other's who have been through similar situations. That's my thought anyway. And your step-father really said something like that? What an ass. I do understand what it means to comfort a friend in pain, though he didn't go through something as horrible as rape, thankfully.
Now, onto the story...
Oh my lord, you did it again! This ust ust too much. But it's no fair, I want an Elven pillow, too, preferably shaped like Legolas. Think she'd mind if I stole him? |^_~| Legolas is such a doll. And when she started talking about a snuggle charm, heh heh heh. I can't wait for more! Don't make me wait too long! I like how you make her have this wit about her that I rarely see in LotR OCs. And I'm sure several of the things she says could be misconstrued by the fellowship. That could make things interesting.
Oh and I didn't mind her bitchin' out at Boromir. He had it comin, and I think he needed to be told off. The fellowship is way too tolerant sometimes... I don't hate him, but I'm not a huge fan. In fact I'm sure you've figured out my fave character by now, heh. It would've been awesome to see him and Asca go at it, so I'm sad to hear that they won't be. I hope they do a little at least though... Oh and what are you gonna do with Haldir!? I so pso picture it. Can't wait to see it. And I would like to see more interaction with the hobbits and Gimli. Yeah, that's about it for now. |^_^| Oh, and did I mention to hurry with the next chapter yet?
person kirameki
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and 1 more thing! If you use any elvish, could you have the translation for it at the end of the chapter. I know a few words, but not much and it would be helpful. Thanks. *bows out*
person Elerrina Rose
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, good. I'm glad they're off Carahdras. Yay Moria! At least the Balrog will keep her warm when she doesn't have her elf-pillow!
tee hee. I love Boromir and Haldir too, but part of loving those guys is accepting their ability to be stuck up pricks :) I can't wait for Hal to get his comuppance when he meets Asca. *les*les* I'm laughing already...
Keep the wonderfulness coming.
~ Elerrina Rose
person AzureDragoness
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yup, Im still here. Med school? And you STILL manage to write anything?? Wow, are you some kind of god?????? XD Anyways, I like the play, especially since it reminds me of my friends and myself ^__^ Well, keep it up! Tis fluffy, yet not, and for once, the OC is SMART! And still not a Mary-Sue!!! *gasp*

Ok, bed-time for me... sleep deprivation is scary o__O
person kirameki
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story so far! I mean it! I just love Asca, though not as much as Legolas |^_~|. She's hilarious. And when she told off Boromir! Oh, it was pure genius! I couldn't help but smile as I read. I eagerly await the next chapter, so hurry up an post it! . I want to know what happens when she finds out that Legolas is a prince. That conversation should prove to be amusing |^_^|.
person AzureDragoness
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* More! This sounds so good, I can't wait to see what you could come up with next.
person AzureDragoness
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Prettyful ^__^ Keep it up, I'll be hove4ring til this story is done (and likely after, just for fun)
person satiana
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I Love it! I was so happy and laughing so hard when she put the snow on his boots. I like her name too.
person satiana
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"“You. I say again, you have a very nice body. Definitely easy on the eyes. I fault you for any impure thoughts I migappeappen to voice while in such close yet view worthy proximity to you.”" LOL Oh man my sides hurt. I love her little quips. You have to write more.