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Dum Dum Dum! Moria!!!! Can't wait for next chapter, please update. OOO AND MAYBE ASCOL CAN FIND SHOES MADE OF MITHRIL! hehe later

Fluent in Sindarin and Quenya? Hmm... Looks like I have work to do.. ;)
Anyways, a great chapter - better than the last ones I'd say. Very good describing of the chaos (I think people have a tendency to tell what they saw in the movie - and that makes it too organized) when the Sea-beast attacks.
And no, I wouldn't say it's Mary-Sue.. Firstly, she didn't get into the battle. Secondly, she is an independant individual (try saying that fast three times in a row..). Thirdly, she isn't latching on to every member of the fellowship. Fourthly, she didn't get hurt by the creature. So no, not Mary-sue.. Unless "Mary-sue" means "original character".. *glares at those running around with that belief*
Also, as another reviewer mened,ned, then Asca is too damned "screwed up" to be a Mary-Sue... There you have it. Bring us a little more trauma, and I'll personally eat the first person who screams "MARY SUE!!" *bares her dragon-sized fangs*

I am thoroughly enjoying your story! Very well written with great ideas and interesting twists! Very nice romance and relationships between the characters! Thanks for sharing your talent!
- R

No words. just a huge, adoring grin :)
~Elerrina Rose

Mary-Sue is when the female OC is GOD. Asca aint GOD, she's too screwed up ^__^ jk, I love her already. How are you fluent in any el lan languages?? Are you one of those people?? You know, who are people? *shifty eyes* Sorry, sugar-high. Um, yeah. Translations apreciated! Cause now, I GET it... not that I didn't before, but that's not the point. The point is I have no point. *re-reads what she just typed* o_____O Um, yeah, definite sugar-high. I will wander off now, to wait impatiently for the next chapter.

I sympathize with , ca, cause my dad used to drag me into caves all the time. I hate the dark, getting dirty, cold, tight spaces (which there always are), and heights (again, there's always a ton). Not to mention the creepy noises... ugh. Hate. Gimmie a killer mountain any day!

AWWW! Its so how how she is in depression. I have a few friends with the same problem and i know how they act when they dont take there meds. Its soo sweet how Legolas comforts her. Please update soon.
And POTC kicks ass!

Shoes!!!!!! Finally!!! |^__^| Even if her pop culture references, confuse them, they certainly amuse us. Legolas is such a cutie. But I don't want him to fade... |T_T| Whoa, Our Leggie is one fast mover... Wasn't expecting it to progress quite that fast. I wonder what she will do when she realizes just what it means for an elf to fall in love with a mortal? I don't know what I'd do if I was stuck in Moria with them, I'd be freaking out. As I always say, I'm not afraid of the dark, rather, I'm afraid of what's in it. |^_^| A personal saying of mine. Anyways, your so lucky to know elvish, I want to learn but I don't know how to go about it. Take your time responding, I know how it is to be swamped, I will be as well soon. Good Chappie. I can only imagine what will happen next when the orcs and troll attacks, not to mention the Balrog. Well, I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update.

As usual, a wonderful chapter. However, I think you should let Asca have a few good memories from her own world.. Something good that she could tell about - and not just songs, but actual memories...

Another awesome chapter. Y'know I never really thought of the elves fading from grief like suicide, but, in a fashion it kind of is. Interesting... Well, we'll be in Moria soon, and Asca has her elf-sized pillow back. |^_~| Can't wait for the next chapter. And it really would be nice if you translated the elvish you use. I know words like mellon-nin, but am unsure of whole sentences. Well, that's it for now. Keep up the hard work.

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet... yeah, elf smoochies cure all ^______^ If it's not too much trouble, could you be so kind as to provide translations of the elvish somewhere? I have an idea of what they'ryingying, but I'd rather be sure. Anywho, keep writing! At this point, I don't care if it's a Mary-Sue, I like her too much...