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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Celesta,
First of all I think this a great story. You did a wonderful job of integrating her into the fellowship. And do not pay any attention to those that say it was too soon. According to the book it took the fellowship 1 1/2 weeks to get from Rivendell to Carhadras and another 1 1\2-2 weeks to get from Carhadras to Lothlorien. I am assuming She was with them for t 3-t 3-6 days before she and Legolas 'married'. If she was mostly talking with Legolas during the walking (since he was carrying her) then of course they'd get to know each other better and some people can just tell they can completely trust others.
As for her chewing out Boromir, she apologized as well. And I do not know any woman from our time taking that kind of talk from any body. I think it is good that she is able to trust the guys so much as to tell them about her abusive father and ex-boyfriend. It is good to vent and share. It's healthy. And might I add 'You go Legolas' when he said, "There will be much blood spilt." I don't think he's ever been that angry. 'IF' her b^$!#% of a father and a$$^@!& of an ex-boyfriend show up they are going to have some very angry people ready to do them a world of hurt. *evil laugh*
It seems to me like the hobbits, Aragorn, and Boromir are acting like brothers (the hobbits are the younger with Aragorn and Boromir the older) and Gandalf is her fatherly or is it grandfatherly figure. Gimli's role right now is more of a good friend. Please update soon. I have really enjoyed the story so far. I can't wait to see her reaction to Galadriel in that chapter.
First of all I think this a great story. You did a wonderful job of integrating her into the fellowship. And do not pay any attention to those that say it was too soon. According to the book it took the fellowship 1 1/2 weeks to get from Rivendell to Carhadras and another 1 1\2-2 weeks to get from Carhadras to Lothlorien. I am assuming She was with them for t 3-t 3-6 days before she and Legolas 'married'. If she was mostly talking with Legolas during the walking (since he was carrying her) then of course they'd get to know each other better and some people can just tell they can completely trust others.
As for her chewing out Boromir, she apologized as well. And I do not know any woman from our time taking that kind of talk from any body. I think it is good that she is able to trust the guys so much as to tell them about her abusive father and ex-boyfriend. It is good to vent and share. It's healthy. And might I add 'You go Legolas' when he said, "There will be much blood spilt." I don't think he's ever been that angry. 'IF' her b^$!#% of a father and a$$^@!& of an ex-boyfriend show up they are going to have some very angry people ready to do them a world of hurt. *evil laugh*
It seems to me like the hobbits, Aragorn, and Boromir are acting like brothers (the hobbits are the younger with Aragorn and Boromir the older) and Gandalf is her fatherly or is it grandfatherly figure. Gimli's role right now is more of a good friend. Please update soon. I have really enjoyed the story so far. I can't wait to see her reaction to Galadriel in that chapter.
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story,
Many try to create a love story with Legolas and wind up making it just pure smut. The "lemon" scene was done tastefully, and the story is mushy, but not corny. I am enjoying it thoroughly. Please update me when you post again.
Many try to create a love story with Legolas and wind up making it just pure smut. The "lemon" scene was done tastefully, and the story is mushy, but not corny. I am enjoying it thoroughly. Please update me when you post again.
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EEEE!!!!! So happy! It continues to be fabulous! Ahhhhhh!!! I'm simply thrilled with this turn of events :)
Hooray! Very well written.
Asca and Legs are so wonderful together that I must keep reminding myself that they met only a few days ago. Wonderful! Yay!
I am just BURSTING to see what comes next!!! eeeeeeeee!!!!!!
Much appreciation,
~ Elerrina Rose
Hooray! Very well written.
Asca and Legs are so wonderful together that I must keep reminding myself that they met only a few days ago. Wonderful! Yay!
I am just BURSTING to see what comes next!!! eeeeeeeee!!!!!!
Much appreciation,
~ Elerrina Rose
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Aquiest your Request" Is that from Pirates of the Carribean??? I personally love that movie.
Your "Lemon" was not so sour. I certainly have writen worse and read worse. I think you handled it quite well. And as for Aragon giving his blessin, well damn he should since he himself is holding the heart of one fair elvish princess.
This fic is getting better and better. Please send more my way
SB
Your "Lemon" was not so sour. I certainly have writen worse and read worse. I think you handled it quite well. And as for Aragon giving his blessin, well damn he should since he himself is holding the heart of one fair elvish princess.
This fic is getting better and better. Please send more my way
SB
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really, hmmm must've missed it. Don't have time to rewatch it right now, but I believe you |^_^|. You seem a trustworthy source. |^_~| Don't know how I missed it...honestlu, I've watched it so many times now. *shrugs* I have a tendency to missing things like that unless rammed in the head with it. As for there being only a little of him even in the books, a girl could hope couldn't she. But, then again, that's why we write fan fics, ne? It makes things more interesting. And it's Orli's B-day? I didn't know that. But then again, I don't know much, it seems. *sigh*
Ah an over protective Legolas and sweet mush. What more could you ask for. |^_^| Though I'm not used to reading it, mush that is. As for them moving fast, It's not that it bothers me persay, it's simply that it's unexpected given her past experiences and how I percieve Legolas character. He seems the slow 'get to know you' kinda guy. Ack, does that even make any sense? I just woke up recently so don't mind me. Nice lemon. Though a strange place to choose their first time to be. |^_^| Though I suppose there could be worst places. And I have yet to see any lemons done in the mines of Moria, so in that it's certainly unique.
Don't sweat over the whole Mary Sue thing. I'm not entirely sure what is and isn't considered one, but from what I've figured this isn't one. And even if it was, who cares. So long as the story is interesting and not the same as everything else that's out there, I don't have a problem with it. It all comes down to the story. Which as I and others have said we enjoy very much. So don't worry so much. |^_^|
Ah an over protective Legolas and sweet mush. What more could you ask for. |^_^| Though I'm not used to reading it, mush that is. As for them moving fast, It's not that it bothers me persay, it's simply that it's unexpected given her past experiences and how I percieve Legolas character. He seems the slow 'get to know you' kinda guy. Ack, does that even make any sense? I just woke up recently so don't mind me. Nice lemon. Though a strange place to choose their first time to be. |^_^| Though I suppose there could be worst places. And I have yet to see any lemons done in the mines of Moria, so in that it's certainly unique.
Don't sweat over the whole Mary Sue thing. I'm not entirely sure what is and isn't considered one, but from what I've figured this isn't one. And even if it was, who cares. So long as the story is interesting and not the same as everything else that's out there, I don't have a problem with it. It all comes down to the story. Which as I and others have said we enjoy very much. So don't worry so much. |^_^|
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay for citrus goodness! Just cause she gets the elf doesn't make it Mary-Sue; it just makes it every het woman's fantasy ^__^ Thanks for spoiling us so with such a long chappie! Want more now....
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Where in the world did the coffin box come from? Are you really that disturbed? It's all good cause I'm that disturbed as well. This sounds weird but my friends se ase as galadriel and i saw rotk with elf ears as well (3 times i might add) and my favorite word to use is spiffy! It's like woosh! Update next chpater soon. Must see if is she fights the troll. Later
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Look, I'm sorry, but she has NO right to lecture Boromir. He said what he thinks is right. He was trying to protect her honor when he protested that it was indecent and she pays him back like THIS? By snapping at him? She needs to 'get her head out of her ass', as she so eloquently puts it, and see that they have obviously very different cultures. In Middle Earth, a very mideaval society, this would have caused a tremendous scandal, no matter how close to death she was.
Yes, I am very glad that Legolas kept his hands to himself, but for heaven's sake, what? Were they gonna start 'getting it on' with the other 8 members of the Fellowship THREE FEET AWAY? He's an Elf(which should say something) and a Prince, no less. He is honorable.
I really dislike this chapter. I will, however continue to read the story, but I really hope that you keep things like cultural differences in mind next time.
Yes, I am very glad that Legolas kept his hands to himself, but for heaven's sake, what? Were they gonna start 'getting it on' with the other 8 members of the Fellowship THREE FEET AWAY? He's an Elf(which should say something) and a Prince, no less. He is honorable.
I really dislike this chapter. I will, however continue to read the story, but I really hope that you keep things like cultural differences in mind next time.
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful, if sad chapter. I was hard pressed to not stop reading it. Not because I didn't want to, only because I was scared to know what had happened in her past. |-_-;| But I endured and finished it! |^__^| And up next is a lemon? *mischievous grin* Can't wait. I also saw RotK in one of it's early showings and it kicked ass! Still, I wish Legolas had played a more prominent part in the movies. He always seemed to get shunted in the background, behind Aragorn and Gandalf. We didn't even get to see him walk on snow. :o( I really wanted to see that... And the parts with him often were cut (if you've seen the extended versions) and/or shortened in the theatrical versions. We didn't get to see nearly half tisdoisdom and perceptiveness behind him he displays in the books. In my opinion anyways. But then again, as a devout Legolas fan I suppose I am a bit prejudiced. |^_^| There's one thing I do approve of, Orli definitely does him justice. |^_~| But, I have once again strayed and gone off topic, haven't I... Well, to the point, another great chapter, can't wait for the next.
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fucked up life? Fucked up doesn't begin to describe it... wah. *tears for Asca* I wanna meet those evil dudes, so I can PERSONALLY explain why they shouldn't do things like that... *cracks knuckles* Venting is good. We should all vent. It is healthy... gah. First a sugar-high, now a cold... I doubt I shall ever submit a sane review again -___- Anyways, update soon! May there be much happy screwing ^__^ *holds up an "I love smut" sign*
Laters!
Laters!