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please update soon, i can't wait to see what happens next!

I finally got myself over here to read this story and it is wonderful! I'm not usually a Het fan, but I was drawn in so quickly. Your plot is compelling, and the characterizations of Orophin, Haldir and Rumie pee perfect. Actually, all of your characterization is great. Even though we only met Hanath for a moment, I cried. Wonderful work, love. I cannot wait to see how this plays out.

Wow... simply ama. Al. All of the characters have depth and attitudes of their own (especially Haldir!) I am truly astonished at how this story actually has volume compared to all the other sugar fics or dark fics that are horribly written. It is such a relief to stumble upon a nice, well written suprise that actually keeps you returning to the site to check and re- check for updates. I am also suprised to see how few reviews you have recieved noting the many hits you have! Some lazy arses just have to much sloth to type!

Well please update!

I ran into this story by accident and I must say, its a great read! YOu've done a wonderful job protraying the emotions of the three brothers and i love the tension you put in there between them. So, what is Haldir keeping from the rest of us and his brother? Cant wait to read the rest.. i'm REALLY dying to find out why the humans will kill elves and does it have aing ing to do Haldirs attitude?

Eagerly waiting....

PJ

This is quite different. I just hope Orophin doesn't completely disintegrate.
Haldir certainly has an attitude. Rumil is portrayed well.
Thank you