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for The Forsaken

by Shanastay

person Amber
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww... poor Erestor. Good luck on healing Erestor.
Liked Sam. =)
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person dawnenab
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok. This is me begging. I don't usually beg, but I am more than willing to bend my neck if you will jusVE MVE ME MORE!!!!!!

I feel like a junkie over here.

*prostrates herself & begs*

PPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE!

~Ali
person Tal
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW Poor E. Another wonderful chapter to a very promising story. It is wonderful to see this nurturing side of Shar and Haldir. E definitely went to the right place!!

Sam cracks me up. ADHD posterchild was precious. That "Who the hell are you" comment was so appropriate for her. She privdes the perfect amoutn of comic relief to this situation...ligthens things up a bit.

This story has amazing potential at the hands of such a gifted writer. I really enjoy all of your stories immensely. They are helping me through a lot of issues we have in common.

Tal
person dawnenab
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok Shana, I am really starting to sound like a broken record here. First of all, GREAT UPDATE! Second of all, you need to know that you have completely spoiled me for Haldir fiction. I have only found one other author that I can even bear to read with regard to our beloved Marchwarden, and you've even inspired me to try a Haldir fic out myself. Maybe I'll let you know when it's posted and you could tell me what you think?

At any rate, You are the best girl! Keep up the updates, cause I go crazy with the waiting!

~Ali
Proud member of the Tattooed and Pierced Women of the World
person Rainien
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh excellent! This is one of my favorite stories of yours. i'm so glad you updated! *S*

Poor Erestor. Whoever hurt him needs to be shot. Several times, actually, beginning with the ankles and working upward, waiting a few days in between shots.

Well done, my dear friend. I'm looking forward to more.
person dawnenab
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shana,

I feel like you may get bored reading my reviews, but I can't help telling you each time hwo fabulous they are. Yve tve taken me ina whole different direction. Made me dislike someone I really like (reserving that for this pculacular fic tho...lol) and made me laugh so hard I nearly spit my drink all over the desk. LOVE the T-shirt!

I am looking forward to yet another update. *runs off to read another of Shana's great stories*

Later!

~Ali
Proud member of the Tattooed and Pierced Women of the World
person Maria
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your story. It was well written and i hope you plan on updating soon.
person Rainien
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well done! And we get Erestor's story next? YIPPEE!!! Can't wait. *S*
person Tux
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL Shana! Were you a *teeny* bit miffed at me when you wrote this?! ;) j/k
Anyway, things are getting interesting, what next?!

*hugs*
person Angharad Muirne Na Rosaich
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is definately intriguing. I love your writing style. Keep it up :) Great job :)