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for The Forsaken

by Shanastay

person babmidnight
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was certainly interesting. I liked how you never mentioned who the elf was until the very end. Keeps you wondering who it is. :) Guess I'll just have to read more huh? :)
Brenda
person babmidnight
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
humm...I see the connection with the red head...now that is interesting. I think that means you have to write more for not only for this fic, but for the others too!! hint hint...lol :)
Brenda
person May
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is good. please, keep writing. :)
I almost screamed when I read Erestor's name! :) I really fancy the elf.
I, of course, totally ADORE Haldir. He's my fave elf. This fic has BOTH! it's pure heaven!
person laura h.
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, and it has great potential. Maybe I'm just stupid today, but am I missing the story about Haldir and Shar? Is it posted on ff.net somewhere? I checked your author profile and didn't see it. Maybe I'll look back tomorrow when I've had a few more hours of sleep
person kanyin
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story.working on 7 fics all at the same time must be pretty hard. please update this one. email me whenyou do
person trekqueen
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh who is the mysterious little elf? hm
On to more!
person trekqueen
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
naughty naughty! Yea I know, I'm not an angel either but I enjoyed the writing of the love scene. Only so many people can write that stuff well.
person trekqueen
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More more more more more!
BTW, is this the same Melamin from sexy Legolas story?
person Wilwarin
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally read Modern AU stories, but I made an exception.
This is a good story. But would you *please* stop using the Grey Company's Elvish? It's not the real thing. There are several other sites that have more accurate Elvish.
Other than that, keep going. I want to know more about Orophin and the twins.
person KnowInsight
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*smirks* Still a pun pun though.
Anyway, nice flash back.
Where's Orophin? *looks worried* Hopes he's ok. More concerned about Erestor thought, cuz he at least there so things can be done.
Looking forward to more.
Am ^~^