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person Jayn
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW KUTE!! I'm glad their together but i feel really bad for Elrohir, and Legolas in a way. Well, I wouldn't know true love if it came and bit my in the @$$... I'm one of those people who can't tell it in others of my self. If they like me, tell me or I'll never know... Lol. Meep, tangent.

I'm only on 13? But theres so many!! I wanna see them together!! but i love how they get together. Its more real then two or three sentences on how time passed. Lol. Your a very dedicated author. Wish i was like that... ^_^
person kirameki
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! Go Elladan. As for Elrohir and Legolas, on the other hand.... |-_-;| Stupid Legolas, he's so clueless. I feel so sorry for Elrohir. *shakes Legolas* Wake up you idiot! And as for Melthoron, oh that was hilarious. Only the twins would dare such a thing. Not that he didn\esereserve it... Let's see, so now they've bedded half the royal family. |^_^| This is just too much. Anyways, that's all. I'm hard pressed when writing all these reviews for you, seeing as there are only so many times you can tell a person of their brilliance. I figure you know by now my standing on the series, after all I've read the entire thing thus far. |^_^| I hope it doesn't take too much longer for Legolas and Elrohir to get together. Elrohir's situation is so heart wrenching.
person Deathangelgw
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been keeping up with this delicious tale now for about four months and dorkus me has not reviewed it at all!! Shame on me!! No wait, yes I did!! I begged for more!

Well guess what...I have been faithfully reading it and now I am BEGGING for more!! Gah...I can't stand the inbetween waits between this glorious piece of art's chapters!! I long for more...neeeeeed more...am begging for more!!

Such wonderful stuff! Oh my the suspense, the tragedy, the heartache, the lemon...oh my and the teasing! Good god I loved how the twins got back at the oldest brother (not even attempting to remember the name...) And then the sweet declaration between Elladan and Nimethiel! Oh so wonderful! And then I just want to hit clueless Legolas...GAH who would turn down such a wonderful Elf as Elrohir!?

ANYWAYS, enough ranting...though I am sure your ego is up by now...I love this and I doooooooo so want some more soon!!

Love, DA
person Lupusdragon
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For one so intelligent, Legolas is exceedi nai naive. While that can be endearing, it is much more frustrating. I am with Elladan in this, the Wood-elf is afraid of his feelings, afraid of being hurt by love that he cannot see his feelings for what they are. It is unfortunate that he would cause his friend such pain by withholding his heart. It should be obvious to both how much each loves the other, but they are blinded by their fears and pessimism. I would like to shake some sense into the both of them. Perhaps Nimei wil will succeed in making Legolas see reason.
person Pervy Elf
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter you update with gets better and better, and continues to leave me wishing for more!
Those Peredhil twins and Legolas can be quite stubborn, no? As I continue to read, I find myself relating more often then not with Elrohir's predicament. To know that love is so close, but thought not returned is a horrible thing. And that conection with your story lets me enjoy the angst just that much more.
I can't say enough great things about your story that haven't already been said. Update soon, for I will be waiting!

person louise_oblique
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fab and looking forward to the next huggs louise

srry short uni exam this afternoon
person Jayla
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been enjoying your stories so much. You put so much depth of character and feeling into your stories. I am so impatient for Legolas to finally realize his feelings for Elrohir and yet I am loath to reach the end of the story. You really are quite talented at weaving a tale!! Thankyou also for being so prompt at updating.
Jayla
person Kryspen
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* am having to skip over the Elladan/OFC parts ^_^ but have enjoyed reading the rest!
person Anita H.
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I did not review sooner, but I am in Toronto right now for my 8 week clinical placement. I flew at fryday and this is the first day at school! Very exciting for someonw who has never been out of Europe :)

Anyway, this is very sad for Elrohir. I am not sure I could deal with that. I don't know why Legolas doesn't see what he is doing to his best friend. Only time will tell.

Continue quickly!!
person viewerv
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* Poor Elrohir.