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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. please update soon. wondering when T will come in ;)
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and man some parts are funny. Especially Awren and how she bosses Aragorn around lol. And uh oh Legolas is pregnant now thats going to be very funny indeed.
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fab u updated :) very good chapter but please do again soon, don't leave us hanging there. this fic is brilliant love it :) can't wait till they all converon pon poor legolas
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What ever you do don't let Aragorn come to Ithilien. OOPS!! Don't you just hate it when that happens.
Well the cat is going to be out of the bag one day and then there will be h*ll to pay. I wonder how Arwen being an elf will take this little side trip of Aragorns just before their wedding. And has Elrond already left middle earth. Book Arwen could leave up till the time Elrond sailed but not after. I hope she is understanding.
I do get a little laugh about Aragorn having second thoughts when he has one of the most beautiful elves in history as his wife. Better figure out what it is you want and need before the wedding. After is too late for an elf and they would be very hard to get rid of.
I look forward to more of your story. It is really well written and intriguing so far. giggle
Well the cat is going to be out of the bag one day and then there will be h*ll to pay. I wonder how Arwen being an elf will take this little side trip of Aragorns just before their wedding. And has Elrond already left middle earth. Book Arwen could leave up till the time Elrond sailed but not after. I hope she is understanding.
I do get a little laugh about Aragorn having second thoughts when he has one of the most beautiful elves in history as his wife. Better figure out what it is you want and need before the wedding. After is too late for an elf and they would be very hard to get rid of.
I look forward to more of your story. It is really well written and intriguing so far. giggle
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fantastic!! you have done it again. i can't wait for the next chapter
most impressed! am wondering what they think it could be as he is male, i.e will they think it's a tumour or something? i really like how you show legolas to be beloved of his people and very important to them, you give a sence that he is a strong and wise leader which i find refreshing as mpreg's can be way to feminising of characters. keep up the good work ;)
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most impressed! am wondering what they think it could be as he is male, i.e will they think it's a tumour or something? i really like how you show legolas to be beloved of his people and very important to them, you give a sence that he is a strong and wise leader which i find refreshing as mpreg's can be way to feminising of characters. keep up the good work ;)
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
brilliant, wonderfully writen and engaging, can't wait for the next part. leggy brilliant!
happy new year
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great write more now!
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When I first started reading fan fiction I read mostly A/L because that was the easiest to find. I got tired of it and finalot sot savvy enough to be able to search for unusual pairings and stories. The plot that you have chosen has always been a favorite of mine though so I look forward to more. I enjoy the elf or Aragorn accidently getting knocked up and the ramifications of that.
You have a nice way with adjectives and adverbs. Not too much for me but descriptive enough. Thank you for your story. giggle
You have a nice way with adjectives and adverbs. Not too much for me but descriptive enough. Thank you for your story. giggle
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think this chapter could be considered the perfect hook for your story! Already I want to know *everything* . I'll look forward to following this story.
Marie :-)
Marie :-)
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I luved this first chapter it is well written, I'm looking forward to the next part, update soon!