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person HHS
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ow,it didn't go any further?
person MJLuvsPolar
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh an intrigue! I'm still giggling at my image of Erestor almost being caught er ... red handed so to speak. So *nice* of the young ones to try and 'help out' their elders, thotheythey better hope that Glorfindel doesn't find out about it! Eressë , though I admit I'm impaitent as the next person, I'm really starting to fall for the charm of your stories to the point that I feel myself embracing the languid pace of them. In any case, I'm hooked so regardless of where the journey takes me I'm in! I've been reading fan fiction for years, yet I the quality and dedication of authors such as yourself still delightfully surprises me. Thanks for posting - I look forward to catching up with this wonderful series next week after I return from holidays.

Marie ;-)
person Twilight
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hope there is more! Want to see how they face each other the next day.
person louise_oblique
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! loved the end very funny, lol. huggs
louise
person giggle
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh I do hope there is a second chapter somewhere. This is just too good not to have a stunning, stirring ending. giggle
person lovingelves
schedule January 26, 0000 at 12:00 AM
You're not really serious as to taking it off are you, i think i know this Melanie you speak of, she has been putting the same things at a story of mine, as to it wasnt of her liking, but i really hope you will not take it off, its such a great story, it would be really sad if it would be removed because of some girl that doesnt like it.