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person Brazgirl
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fuc.... robbers! They are so savage sometimes... Gods, this is so horrible, believe me. Just take care with what you will right from now on, because I had a case of this kind of stuff (not with the fing add add) and this is really terrible. So... people of the family suffer a lot, we feel in fault and miserable. And Legolas will need his prince on his side. Grrrrrrrrrr damn robbers!
person Sian
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UGH! Jilly, that was so sad, "sniff"
I was however very happy to see an update and as always can't wait to read more.
person Rainien
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Those Men are going to be SO dead.

Poor Legolas. *sigh*
person louise_oblique
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yikkes I do hope you update soon. very well done but yikkkessssssssss!

huggs
louise
person Twilight
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it was unsettling to read about Legolas being attacked and beaten, and finally, to have his finger cut off. But, the story will be richer for the added challenges that Legolas and his family will face because of it.
person Edward Uwnhai Silverfang
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ummm, this was as usual a beautiful story. But there is one thing that just pops out to me as ‘wrong!’ and I’m sure if pointed out even you would want to fix it.
“Please know that if ever you need me, all you need do is call.” Is what Legolas was told by Belorfilad near the end of the fic. They don’t use phones…

Besides that, we were left on quite the cliffy, ‘Bad Jilly, bad!’ That’s such a rude thing to do *pouts* Please remedy that soon…? *Begs*

-Eddie =)
person Sian
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very happy to see this wonderful tale continue. I am truly sorry about your father and many heart-felt wishes are with you I am sure. Thank you for sharing this with us during these rough times.
person louise_oblique
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very very good, but............gahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh cliff-hanger!!!!

huggs
louise
person Date
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sweetie, so gso glad you've been finally able to go on with you story! Great update! *cuddles the captains*
I love your story. But then, that is no news, right? :)

*hugs*
person Brazgirl
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am trully sorry for your loss. I cannot imagine myself in your place but the little that happen to my father I worry. So, I hope he lives forever not only in your heart but also in your mind, I am sure of it.

Now, on the story... thanks for the update! I have been thinking about your fic lately and I am glad you updated! I missed this wonderful world you created, its wonderful!
You did a great job with the captains... it was sad to read the B captain being dismissed and the way he reacted was very sad. But at least he was happy in the end, wasn't he?

And, finally... You are mean! How could you leave us there!!!! I want and need to know more...