rate_review Reviews

You are a wonderfully talented writer! I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed this story. You have created a believable and compeling world with your writing and I can tell you really love your characters. I especially love how you wrote 'little' Legolas in his interactions with his guardians. The loving dicipline is sweet and real. Please continue to keep up the good work!

Don't apologize Ash. Real life is something that can't be put on the back burner all the time:(. Write when you can, and I'll gladly check back to see if you've updated. And thanks for the heads up on the site. I'll definately go check it out right now. Happy writing!

Hope you are feeling better real soonve mve missed new chapters but your health nis more important.

What is going on ?! I’m waiting and waiting...Every day I check up for an update but there’s nothing. Whatever is happening, get a grip and continue !!! Please.

Alsome story I love it please update soon.

Awwwwwww that was soo cute,....^___^..... But Legolas needs to be united with Glorfindel and Elrond! or else Legolas might fall into greif! the horror the horror! you can't let such a thing happen!

Are you going to let Legolas go back to Imis fis for a short while, or *looks mischivious* are they going to vist him, and by vist I mean *wink wink* *nudge nudge*

got to go, my own pathetic excuss for a story needs updating

good luck you're the best

I'm baaaaaaaaaaack! -waves wildly- Computer exploded, couldn't keep up but here I am! Like a bad plague that never goes away. ^^;

You know... Skylenar reminds me of Patata.... Sometimes scthewpid, and stubborn as a fruitcake unless her slave/master is near. I am her slave and master, thankfully no other horses know of this... <.< Otherwise it would be 'Revenge of the Mares!'

Mmm.... sounds good right about now... A soft, cushy sofa... -sighs dreamily-

-bows before galloping horse- Oh so beautiful... -tears well up- Great, you've made me cry! -sulks off to find a tissue-

-snickers- 'Special night.' Have to tell that one to /my/ parents. Won't go further into detail on that one.. -shudders-

The /dream/! -gasps- Suspense! -grins- Oh course Elves don't mine, otherwise we'd have to glue on beards and call them dwarves! Another bit of candy from a jar full of it, meaning the chapter is... -thinks of a good word- Marvelous! Hope for the next part soon... Legolas can't seem to stay out of trouble can he?

Okay,...seems my review got split in two! -holds up two fingers- Peace!

Mmm.... sounds good right about now... A soft, cushy sofa... -sighs dreamily-

-bows before galloping horse- Oh so beautiful... -tears well up- Great, you've made me cry! -sulks off to find a tissue-

-snickers- 'Special night.' Have to tell that one to /my/ parents. Won't go further into detail on that one.. -shudders-

-gasps- The /dream/! Suspense! -grins- Oh course Elves don't mine, otherwise we'd have to glue on beards and call them dwarves! Another bit of candy from a jar full of it, meaning the chapter is... -thinks of a good word- Marvelous! Hope for the next part soon... Legolas can't seem to stay out of trouble can he?

Stupid stubborn Elves. TELL SOMEONE LEGOLAS, DAMNIT! There is no way he's going to be able to handle his grief, esp. as older and wiser Elves have died from it. So, unless he tells his dad he needs to go be with his lovers for a while and then goes to see them (or they come to him), well, sorry, but he's gonna die. Yeah, so I think he should just for once forget his stupid pride and tell someone.

Hehem it's funny you put in Thranduil being dropped on his head, as I actually *was* dropped on my head when I was 2 months old! Yeah, so I got a good giggle out of that.

Anyway, as far as first chapter go, esp. for a sequel, then I don't think it was so bad. And I can't wait for some more, please.

Luv Mawgy

Ok, thanks. I feel much better now, even if you do feel guilty, sorry.

Didn't you get my stick pic? I sent it about a week ago, maybe more. Stupid e-mail must be playing up again. I'll send it again once I've finished reading your next chapter.

Well, I don't think the twins took the news as badly as what you were suggesting they might earlier on. I can understand their misgivings as Elrond's wife had just recently departed (in terms of Elv's passing of time) and not knowing about it aswell. And also Legolas being very much a brother to them and now learns that he is sleeping with their father and 'uncle'.

I liked Leggy and Narofea's little talk about their bondmates, that was such a sweet little moment. And gives a great deal of depth to Erestor's and Narofea's relationship. Thanks for that.

HEHE! Leggy's just as ticklish as me! lol But, again, a nice moment for the lovers to share before departing.

And thanks for the sneak peak at the second part. Sounds pretty interesting so far.

Luv Mawgy