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Hiyo!

I just wanted to say that I'm glad you posted your story here at AdultFanfiction.net, since I've read the first parts, which were originally posted at Fanfiction.net. I really like this pairing (it's one of my favourite's) and hope you'll continue this story until the end.

^-^ Terrenis-chan

Fantastic and a very cute and sweet potrayal of little elfling legolas. brilliant. looking forward to the next chapter

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louise

Sweet story so far. I really like young Legolas stories. Can't wait for more!

Oh, I'm loving this very much so far. Though, itms ums unfair to me for Leggy to loose not only his mother, but then his father actually LEAVES him behind. So Leggy can no longer see his mother, or his father and brothers for quite some time. Very sad, but makes for a good story.

Anyway, please keep going, this is so exciting so far.

Luv Mawgy

P.S. Even though Glorf and Leggy had a strawberry cake in the kitchens, I thought it would have been so cute for Leggy to say he wanted other desserts. After all, Glorf did tell him he could have as much as he wanted.

I love stories that explore the younger years of Legolas' life. This one is both original and very well written, and I am thrilled to find it here. You do a wonderful job of showing rather than telling, and that is hard to do. The interaction between Leg and Glor is just lovely. I don't know how far you plan to take this, but I really hope it goes through his younger, and then adult life. I'd love to see how these relatiops eps evolve.

Very very upseting and a bit to much info. but very well writen and i am looking forward to the next bit. glad you included warnings. i think this will be a very good fic. looking forward to the next chapter

take care
louise

Wonderful!!
Ahhgg! Please, please update!
I love elfling-Legolas ^_^
Too cute...
and Glorfindel/Legolas, rooowwr!!
Very well written.
Please continue~!!

Poor L. That was just awful.
He seems to be so sweet in your story. Now he just needs to be taken care of and healed.
Rotten orcs. I actually though orcs just killed everybody and anybody but since Celebrian was "tormented" and Tolkien left it wide open as far as what that meant you can just run with that thought.
Thanks for sharing with us and I look forward to more sweet L. giggle