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for A Healing Touch

by Gore

person isisisatis
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, me like very much! :-)
I'm glad you didn't make me wait too long after the last chapter, you got me a little bit worried there.
And I think this chapter with the dragon was so lovely, even if it doesn't serve any purpose in the future story. I think I would have been very cross with you if you hadn't shared it with us.

CU,
Isis
(you got my name right , but you can go with this shorter version in the future *g*)
person Kirsten
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Again, exellent work, I think i might be addicted to this story...
The drawif lef legolas and the twins has sorta turned into legolas and elrond...
Still black-and-white sketch form at the moment, need to colour it...
I will scan it in when it's done
Keep up the brilliant work
Kirsten
person Steph
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch 9 - You are going to spoil us with your timely updates, but I'm not complaining. That was a perfect conclusion to the dragon sequence. I love the roof top scene too. At the beginning of the chapter you mentioned your web page in one of you responses to a viewer. I'd love to visit your page if you could give me the link.



Thank you for another beautiful chapter! I can't wait to see what you do next...
person Mawgy
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH! Another brilliant chapter! Thankyou SO much for the update! I can't wait to find out how the battle between the two dragons end.

Luv Mawgy

Sorry for the short review, but I'm very busy at the moment.
person Kirsten
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You're story, my dear, is the best i have read in a VERY long time. It brought tears to my eyes (and my cheeks, and my chin) and inspired so many drawings (The image of the two brothers comforting Legolas was just crying out to be drawn). I LOVE Legolas, and Elrond, and Glorfindel, in fact, i just love your characters! You really do develop them well, and they feel more like personal friends han words on a page. I don't know too much about this, but my mum (a writer herself) told me that was the mark of a good writer.
I like the way you've taken into account the way trauma and low self esteem affect people (and elves). I have pretty low self-esteem, but this story made me feel better
Thank you, and keep it up!
Kirsten
person Shadow Archer
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought I got an e-mail saying they were going to take R rated stories off. That would suck so badly if they did because it's kind of stupid. I can see why they took NC-17's off but R's? They are stupid.

Anyway... a dragon... cute! Never thought of Dragon's living in Middle Earth but I can go with that... keep going, I don't mind the graphic stuff, I usually skip over it..... ::sorry if that sounds rude or anything:: and go right to the aftermath. LOL.

Update again soon!

}}~~~~~~> Shadow Archer
person Mawgy
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, fair enough. Still, it would have been a good tense moment for the two Elves that could then have lots and lots of cuddles and sweet words transferred between the two, though I suppose that was done the next day anyway, so no biggy. And, I realise Elrond has seen Leggy naked because he's a healer, but when I wrote those comments you hadn't yet mentioned that Elrond bathed him every night.

Aw, the dragon sounds SO cute. But, I'm with the red-head on this. Leggy keeping Nuarhir is only going to end in trouble. And, I really liked how the dragon refferred to the Elves as the two-legged beings. That was adorable.

You know, if it weren't for Leggy being up to something, then I'd swear Erestor is out to get Leggy. But, as Leggy is currently keeping a dragon in his room, I'll let it slide for now. Good thing no one else hoticoticed, well, except for Glorfindel, but he thinks it's just fear and something medical.

Touching moment at the end there. It's nice how Leggy not only gets a pet, but also a friend who understands how he feels. Kinda makes me think he should be able to keep the creature when the others find out, though I suppose they'll be against that. Stupid adults are always quite predictable when it comes to big, dangerous beasts. lol

Ok, now, I realise you're no doubt doing you're best to get these chapters out quickly, but, please hurry. I was used to getting a new chapter every day, then, suddenly, I had to wait half a week! I almost died when I woke up and found no update that first day! Come on, you don't need sleep... ;P PLease, I NEED to find out what happens to Leggy and his new friend. How will the twins cope with their room being destroyed? Will Elrond find anything medically unusual about the boy? Will Glorfindel ever be forgiven for killing an innocent boar? Will Erestor discover Leggy's secret? what will happen to Nuarhir? These are all questions I desperately need answers to. So, please, update soon and I'll love you, update sooner, and I'll love you forever! Update wehenver you're ready, well, then, I guess I'll still love you forever for just sharing this fic with me and all your other readers. SO nice of you to do so.

Luv Mawgy
person mystkyten
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update soon. I want to hear more about the little dragon. I hope he can "keep" him.
person m
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
a dragon?! oh, I can't wait to see what you do next!
person giggle
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the baby dragon. I've read all Anne McCaffrey's books so you know I am a dragon aficionado.
Nuarhir is too cute. Yes Legolas will have to return the baby to his mother but not before they have some adventures.
Can you imagine what he would do as he was getting bigger? When little he destroyed the twins room. Imladris would be in ruins.
Poor Glorfindel. The dragon got him good.
I really like the twins playing with Legolas. I love scenes of a little Legolas having a good time.
This weekend we'll be seeing grown up Legolas on the big screen, as well as other elves, hobbits and assorted men. We can't wait. giggle