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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Teehee, oh so kawaii. :DD
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I always cry when Babmi's mother dies. And, I used to hate Dumbo something shocking, but that was mainly because my brother would watch it at least twice a day (no kidding!) but now it's probably my favourite of all!
I realise Erestor not getting a good view of the chicks was only half the reason for his temper, but it's so fun to think that was the whole reason behind his outb! LO! LOL! Anyway, yes please. It doesn't even have to Lindir or anyone in particular, just as long as he get s a good heartfelt fuck or two aswell. Seems so unfair that he should always be left out. By the way, I missed him not being in this chapter, I hope he's in the next.
OK, gotta go have a cold shower now, and maybe a long run even after that. That was such a sweet yet hot and steamy sex scene! I loved it almost as much as what Leggy did! BRILLIANT!
Oh, and usually, I hate it when Arwen (or any females in fact) are in slash, but for once, I'm glad she was in it. Without her, Leggy probably d had have run off again and there would have been no sweet Elf sex at the end, which would have been very disappointing. I'm not quite sure I understand why Elladan and Elrohir wouldn't be as approving as Arwen and others, but I'll let it go for now. Course, I'd love it if they were to find out in later chapters and there was this big fight about it, you know, just to build up some tension or something. (Up to you, of course, oh wonderful author of this fic, I'm just merely saying what I'd love to see happen).
Also, I thought it was so adorable when Leggy asked Glory if he really liked sucking his cock. That was brilliant!
And I'm glad Leggy is going home every now and then. Oh, and when Elrond said Leggy's better with a bow than Elladan (i think it was him, but could have been Elrohir), but for Glory not to tell that particular twin just a really good, sweet little moment.
Anyway, thanks for another amazing chapter, and I can't wait for the next one.
Luv Mawgy
I realise Erestor not getting a good view of the chicks was only half the reason for his temper, but it's so fun to think that was the whole reason behind his outb! LO! LOL! Anyway, yes please. It doesn't even have to Lindir or anyone in particular, just as long as he get s a good heartfelt fuck or two aswell. Seems so unfair that he should always be left out. By the way, I missed him not being in this chapter, I hope he's in the next.
OK, gotta go have a cold shower now, and maybe a long run even after that. That was such a sweet yet hot and steamy sex scene! I loved it almost as much as what Leggy did! BRILLIANT!
Oh, and usually, I hate it when Arwen (or any females in fact) are in slash, but for once, I'm glad she was in it. Without her, Leggy probably d had have run off again and there would have been no sweet Elf sex at the end, which would have been very disappointing. I'm not quite sure I understand why Elladan and Elrohir wouldn't be as approving as Arwen and others, but I'll let it go for now. Course, I'd love it if they were to find out in later chapters and there was this big fight about it, you know, just to build up some tension or something. (Up to you, of course, oh wonderful author of this fic, I'm just merely saying what I'd love to see happen).
Also, I thought it was so adorable when Leggy asked Glory if he really liked sucking his cock. That was brilliant!
And I'm glad Leggy is going home every now and then. Oh, and when Elrond said Leggy's better with a bow than Elladan (i think it was him, but could have been Elrohir), but for Glory not to tell that particular twin just a really good, sweet little moment.
Anyway, thanks for another amazing chapter, and I can't wait for the next one.
Luv Mawgy
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was hot! Really can't wait to see what you'll write next.
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I sent my friend this story since she canget get on AFF, and she wanted me to review the following:
Vincentsgurl: I really, really, really, really, like this story. I, unlike my good friend there did read the yaoi scenes and I like the way you write. I have admired how people can write such good fics, for I suck at writing and out of all my friends only two are good. I hope you update again soon so I can find out what happens and so that SA can send me the next chapter. Thanks!~~Vincentsgurl
Yeah, she's an odd one. lol. Umm... not really I scanned them... i don;t mean to offend your writing or anything but I jsut don;t really read them. LOL ::looks sheepish:: sorry. Anyway Vincent chick there liked it and I'll be sending her the next chapter as soon as you put it up. Thanks again
Silent Archer
Vincentsgurl: I really, really, really, really, like this story. I, unlike my good friend there did read the yaoi scenes and I like the way you write. I have admired how people can write such good fics, for I suck at writing and out of all my friends only two are good. I hope you update again soon so I can find out what happens and so that SA can send me the next chapter. Thanks!~~Vincentsgurl
Yeah, she's an odd one. lol. Umm... not really I scanned them... i don;t mean to offend your writing or anything but I jsut don;t really read them. LOL ::looks sheepish:: sorry. Anyway Vincent chick there liked it and I'll be sending her the next chapter as soon as you put it up. Thanks again
Silent Archer
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just...wow. That was beautiful, and sooo worth the wait. I actually squeeked out loud when I saw you had updated this. And I had no idea you would give us this awesome chapter so soon. I love that it has progressed so far with the three ofm. m. It was done really well, and I was not at all put off by the familial relations they have developed. It is written with just the right amount of love and eroticism to make it perfect!
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was absolutly fantastic you go girl!!! what a wonderful way of writing it of just WOW!! very cool. wondering about daddy's reaction though
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January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Its really hard to think of anything other then wow. You are a great writer, and I had a hard time stepping away from my computer as I read this. You made me cry, laugh and smile. I'm a Legolas fan and your rptirptions were beautifly writen, and the child Legolas was so cute!! I hope to read more things from you, I also thank you for the use of elvish... it really adds to the story. ^_^
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL, hmm.... I won't kill you so don't worry. I'm an open minded person. Everytime I come on here I must miss ur updates. This is really starting to make me angry. Anyway! lol Thranduil comes back..is iis isn't the end right? Please don't let it be the end. Update again soon and I will hopefully be able to review quicker.
Silent Archer
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story - little Legolas is sooo sweet. I like how the twins interact with him. Glorfie was the perfect one to help Legs with his little "Problem."
While I'm glad that his father finally showed up, I hope he doesn't plan to take him back to Mirkwood now.
Please post soon!
While I'm glad that his father finally showed up, I hope he doesn't plan to take him back to Mirkwood now.
Please post soon!
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooops, I forgot to put my name at the top. How silly. But never fear, for I shall always be the one, the only, Mawgy, your faithful reader and reviewer extrodanair! (even if I do sometimes forget it myself. lol)
As much as I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but, if you were aiming to have me crying in this chapter, well, sorry, but you failed. I did get close whenh Leggy said to Elrond he really thought his father would come, and when he became so terribly lost as to what to do when he became aroused, but no tears actually fell. Yet I'm sure you'll find heaps of more opportunities to have me blubbering like a little girl in chapters to come.
Oh, don't worry, I LOVE cartoons too! Esp. Disney, I was practically raised on them!
Now, I was really pissed off Thr Thranduil didn't come, but, I guess as he is there now, I'll let it slide for the time being.
You know, Erestor is turning into my favourite character! I don't know why, but, when he found the elflings and told them off for spying on the females, I thought it was for the reasons he said; invading their privaNeveNever, EVER, would I have thought his anger be born of hatred for the kids got a better view than what he did! Any chance you might give him someone special, so he won't be alone any more and have a happy ending, well, for him at least? I'd really appreciate that. Maybe Lindir or some other elf, even Haldir, possibly? Please? I'll get down on my knees and beg you to give Erestor some happiness, he deserves it.
Oh, so so glad Glorfindel helped Leggy out with his little pro. I . I truly think there couldn't have been a better person for the job, not even Elrond. I think he might have been too clinical about it, as he is a healer.
Anyway, thanks for another great update. And, not only the quality of it either, the quantity is also something to enjoy immensely. Can't wait for the next chapter,
Luv Mawgy
As much as I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but, if you were aiming to have me crying in this chapter, well, sorry, but you failed. I did get close whenh Leggy said to Elrond he really thought his father would come, and when he became so terribly lost as to what to do when he became aroused, but no tears actually fell. Yet I'm sure you'll find heaps of more opportunities to have me blubbering like a little girl in chapters to come.
Oh, don't worry, I LOVE cartoons too! Esp. Disney, I was practically raised on them!
Now, I was really pissed off Thr Thranduil didn't come, but, I guess as he is there now, I'll let it slide for the time being.
You know, Erestor is turning into my favourite character! I don't know why, but, when he found the elflings and told them off for spying on the females, I thought it was for the reasons he said; invading their privaNeveNever, EVER, would I have thought his anger be born of hatred for the kids got a better view than what he did! Any chance you might give him someone special, so he won't be alone any more and have a happy ending, well, for him at least? I'd really appreciate that. Maybe Lindir or some other elf, even Haldir, possibly? Please? I'll get down on my knees and beg you to give Erestor some happiness, he deserves it.
Oh, so so glad Glorfindel helped Leggy out with his little pro. I . I truly think there couldn't have been a better person for the job, not even Elrond. I think he might have been too clinical about it, as he is a healer.
Anyway, thanks for another great update. And, not only the quality of it either, the quantity is also something to enjoy immensely. Can't wait for the next chapter,
Luv Mawgy