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for A Healing Touch

by Gore

schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Leggy and Elly. ;;

::petsuus and cuddles them::

The orcs are so not bang-able. :D
person lilith
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD !!! You hurt them... You can't kill them ! Any of them !!! HOW COULD YOU ?! ... I really LOVE this story but PLEASE (!!!) I *NEED* a happy ending !!!!
person y
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Silent Archer & Lancesgurl
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lancesgurl: Oh yeah, such a good story!
SA: You need to get AFF. I'm getting tired of sending you every chapter.
Lancesgurl: But you love me as a friend right?
SA: You wish. Now review

Lancesgurl: Such a pain, anyway you have to update soon! Please! you update and I'll review. PLEASE!
SA: Done? okay good. I like the cliffy, will give me something to think about at work tomorrow. Please keep going, I want to see what the orcs do to Legolas and Elrond... lol. ::smirks evilly::

Lancesgurl: you have a perverted mind and yet you won;t read Slash? Ur F*cked up in the head.
SA: Thank you.
person Starwind
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was just down right evil!! Now u have to update soon so we can find out what is in store for Elrond and Legolas.
person louise_oblique
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fantastic yet again, cliffhanger!!

huggs
louise
person Mawgy
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh, I just LOVE Glorfindel and Leggy together. Don't get me wrong, Elrond's great too, just I think with their sense of humour Legy and Glory can indeed "be dangerous together." LOL! Though, I thought it was cute how Leggy asked if ELrond won't mind, that was sweeet.

Now, I realise you've mentioned Leggy reaching majority now, but, how tall would he be? Stupid that I should be asking that, but whenever Elrond or Glory kiss him, I keep thinking they're lowering themselves down to his height from when he was a child, then I remember he's now technically a young adult, but I still can't get the height right. SO, would he be around their height but a few inches shorter? A foot smaller? What?

I cry everytime Simba's father dies, and when Dumbo goes to see his Mum and she swings him in her trunk, then you go around to see al the animals taking care of their young with the sad, soppy song in the background. Very sweet.

Ok, well, as it was your first sex scene, It was BRILLIANT! Don't get me wrong about that, but I feel that Glory wouldn't have been able to reach Leggy's member with his mouth from where he was, but I think the thought of it was so arousing that no one really cares. I'm just being technical. Still, no less EXCELLENT! because of that. My shower? Well, yes, very cold! But, I needed it.

Now, yes, very very evil cliffie, but, as Elrond and Leggy are two of your main characters, I'm not worried. Without them, you don't have a story. Somehow I think one of Leggy's brothers and a band of soldiers are going to come and save the day. Am I right? (course, then you might just change it if I have guessed it right, just so I'll think I didn't. *shrugs* Do what you want. It's worked o far! ;P )

I LOVED the parting scene between Leggy, Glory and Elrond, it was so sweet, esp. now Leggy has Glry's very own bow and arrows.

Anyway, until next time,

Luv Mawgy
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHS!

::freaks out::

Legggggy. ;;

Veruu nice chapter though. :D It was totally bang-able.
person Mawgy
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Also, there was not enough Erestor in that chapter to satisfy me, I hope you'll work on that. *g* And, just out of curiosity, if you have worked it out yet, when might I expect Erestor to get a good screw? Like, around what chapter, do you think? Thanks
person Steph
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'll forgive the cliffhanger since you gave us such a sexy opening. I'll also forgive you because I love it when a story keeps me on the edge of my seat, as this one has always done. Oh I just love you for this!