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for A Healing Touch

by Gore

person Steph
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ch. 16 - Wow~ so much happened in this chapter that I don't know where to start. I love how well you progress with each update, giving us enough to satisfy, yet leaving us wanting more. I am so in love witorfiorfindel in this! He is such the hero, and he knows when to stand back and watch protectively from the side lines too. He is a great characterizaiton, as they all are. The scene where he finds Legolas tearing at his own skin was just riveting. And I love how he vows to Elrond that he'll not let Legolas fade. Oh the drama...;) Thank you so much for this awesome and timely update!
person Cally
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter 12 and I want to commend you on how well you have done writing the sex scene. They are so much more difficult when you have three players instead of two, usually one is cought up writing the action and one of the characters is left out for a large gap. But you where amazing with the way you kept it equel between them.

There is one thing though.... I have to say I would have liked more lust *winks at you* Or perhaps a spanking!
person Silent Archer
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had a 2 hour delay last time. LOL. I don't even have school tomorrow. Oh poor leggy. is he going to be emotionally damaged for now on? please update again soon. Please? lol, I'll try and get to review it as soon as I can but no promises my internet connection blows. loldatedate please!

Silent Archer ::shivers in cold::
person lilith
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooh...poor Leggy !!!
but there will be a happy ending, right ?
person Isisisatis
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was quite intense and horrible! I really want to see what reason there is to let Legolas suffer again like this.

Isis

P.S.: Even if I don't comment on every chapter, I sure as hell won't desert you and your fantastic story.
And, please, let Erestor have some fun! And don't make me and the others wait too long ;-)
person Autore
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My sadistic side certainly enjoyed it, as did the romantic part (the cuddly bit at the end ^_^), but my Elf Defense side was quite unhappy. Oh well. Poor Legolas... but I love having him tortured, and I'm sure Elrond and Glorfindel can provide some.... consolation. Hehehe... looking frd trd to more ASAP!!!!
person Morelwen
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, Legolas is so sweet, I feel sorry for him. It's good to know that some one around here is following the book, and knows what they're talking about too ^.^ I hate reading fics if the writer dosn't know much about the books, but you seem to know a lot. Great job. I love the first chapter and I pray that the rest will be just as good if not better

person giggle
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rotten Bad Orcs. Of course if it isn't orcs it's men and I would rather it be orcs since I am of the race of Men.
I hope this doesn't send Legolas into a spin again. He has just learned to enjoy unconditional love and that took long enough in his short life so far.
The twins and Glorfindel to the rescue and about time. We now need to get Legolas and Elrond healed of their wounds.
Thank you for another elf torture and rescue with a lot of angst chapter. giggle
person Morelwen
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so-...-cute! ...-.-... o this is such a good story!
person Steph
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Legolas! But you let Glorfindel come before the chapter ended, so I don't feel so dejected. It was a good idea to add the rescue when you did. Now he will have to be saved all over again (from himself), and that is the good part. In regards to your note, I did not get your e-mail, but I didn't want to bother you again about it so I did not mentio. I. I'd really love it if you would send it again. You are so sweet to ask. And thank you for the lovely update!