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for A Healing Touch

by Gore

person Steph
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ch. 20 - Yeah, just when I think it can't get better you throw Haldir in the mix. Not to mention the amazing Legolas sandwich. But in all seriousness, aside from the awesome characterizations, your ever thickening plot is really well thought out. I love the whole scene where they decide who will go on the special mission, and that Legolas is stepping up to do his part. I hope you make him heroic or something, because I'd like to see him impress the others with his skill. And if I'm not mistaken, this is the first time Legolas has met the three Lorien brothers, so that is intersting addition to the story. Thank you so much for the fantastic update!
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I always loved the "because i wanted to," excuss.

Apperently they are using the same people. It wouldn't make sense if they had a different Elrond. I mean, those eyebrows are forever imprinted in my mind. There's no getting rid off it!!!!!!!!
person Silent Archer
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I always thought Orohpin was Thranduil's father... slightly confused here. but that's okay... lol. GO KICK SOME ORC ASS! ^_^ lol okay well update again soon and i'll review you soon again.

GO PANTHERS! I don;t care if I'm from NE I hate the PATS and Panthers rule! <>

Silent Archer
person jaylen
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the additions you added in the opening chapters about when Legolas first came to Imladris, but this is a repost of an old story. Are you going to be making any other changes or is the storyline staying the same?
person Mawgy
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH! I just LOVE that scene between Leggy and Gandalf! I can just imagine Leggy's little arms being elbow length covered in Gandalf's beard! It was SO cute! And Erestor smiled! I especially loved that bit! *g*

Anyway, thanks so much for the update, it was really very good, just like all the others. So, the big battle scene is approaching, hmmm? Excellent, can't wait for it and the outcome of it. Oh, and I liked how Thranduil spared a moment to ease Leggy a little before giving his last little speech, very nice moment.

I don't suppose you want to surprise us again with another quick up, do, do you?

Luv Mawgy

P.S. No, 'cos if I was on one of those shows, I'd give away all the secrets you have lined up for the rest of the story, and I hate it when people do it to me, so I don't want to do it to anyone else. Besides, if I did, then you wouldn't get as many readers and/or reviewers, as they'd already know the main aspects to the story and might be put off reading over what they already know.
person Isisisatis
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*wakes up with a start* "What? Where? Who?"

Na, this time I'm quite awake, LOL!
And this chapter really was worth it, even being so short. The butterfly was so sweet!

Thanks,
Isis :-)

And keep up to up-date so regularly.












person Morelwen
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your whole story, and I've loved it all the way. Please keep writing, this is a good story, but tell me, why is Legolas being abused by orcs? *sniffle* are you going to let us in on it eventualy?
person Silent Archer
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
2 words for Thranduil : Anger Management. Jeez, he's like the Orc slayer! Thranduil the Orc Slayer! s Ths Thranduil racing around slaying orcs with his Half-Orc girl friend:: Yeah... f*cked up world there.

Well I'm freezing so I just wanted to review. Keep going!

Silent Archer
person lilith
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO ! No, don’op nop now ! You can’t !...but you did...That’s so...Oh, just hurry up with the next chapter !
person lilith
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And I forgot say that the flashback was brilliant ! I couldn’t stop laughing...I’m still smiling.