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Well, was certainly different which doesn’t mean it was bad :D And Erestor and Narofea ? I would have never guessed ! Brilliant.
I cawaitwait for an update. I’m so curious what will happen next, especially with our 3 lovely Elves (Leggy, Elrond and Glorfy of course) and Hal-dear. I’m really glad that you’re not planning to end the story soon :D
One question: where did the name Narofea came from ? It’s just my curiosity.

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Hope I enjoyed it? You silly fool, I LOVED it! Oh, I've been waiting for this moment for how many chapters now? And it has surpassed all my expectations! I especially like when Narofea said "Since I was old enough to take myself in hand and imagine you wriggling in pleasure beneath me." Actually, more than liked. I think that would have to be my favourite line in the whole chapter! But, on a whole, the entire chapter was absolute brilliance, especially when you've been having such a rotten time lately and had many obsticles to overcome to get this chapter out.

And, guess what? I think I love Erestor even more now! hehe.

And, about that beastiality thing. You weren't planning on Erestor being paired with anyone (once again, thanks for that), so you couldn't have had any warnings about it as you didn't know you were going to have it. Still, I think I prefer Narofea to the dragon. Thanks.

OH, yes, I LOVE you!? How could I not? IN fact, I think I shall worship you wherever go go from now on. *bows down to my god*

And you dedicated the chapter to me? Awwwww, that's so sweet of you, thanks (I seem to be saying that a lot this review, huh?), but I mean each and every single one of them. You truly outdid yourself Ashie, and went far beyond any expectations I had. All I wanted was for him to have a good, hard fuck and relieve some tension. But being bound to Legolas' best friend? WOW! Didn't see it coming, gotta admit, and never really thought of them as a pair, but they totally work! And I wouldn't want it any other way. You're an absolute credit to yourself Ash. *g*

Sorry about the ankle. I'll kiss it better for you. *kiss*

Ok, just to show you how truly grateful I am, I'll draw you another stick pic for this chapter. Ok?

Anyway, can't wait to see how everyone reacts when they find out what stuffy old Erestor and fiery Narofea have done, especially Legolas, though I think he'll just be happy his friend is happy. Still, I'm sure there'll be at least one person not so happy about the bond. Anyway, you wrote the story, so you know, and as of yet, I don't, though I'm sure i'll find out if I'm right (again *g*) or wrong.

By the way, I didn't annoy you that much, did I? All I did was ask you once, then you said you would, so I just naturally took every oppnitynity available to remind you of your promise. That's all. *looks totally sweet and innocent of any alleged 'annoying' claims against me*

OH, and please tell Isis "you're most welcome" from me. "It was a lot of hard work, but I have this wonderful author wrapped around my little finger. *g* Much like Ungoliel and the orcs! *gg*" Thanks

Anyway, until the next chapter (which is hopefully soon) TTFN (yeah, thanks for that too!)

Much Luv, Mawgy

P.S. Sorry for ruining your review format thing. If you want, you can delete the previous review as I have spacspaces between stuff in this one. Sorry.

Aw, poor you. Really, I mean it. Not being facetious. Thanks for getting Erestor laid! You have made my day. You know how people say about someone who's too uptight that they need to get laid? Well, mmm mmm good.

Well, a lot of authors have difficulty with action scenes. Maybe you do too, and it doesn't live up to your exectations? Perhaps that's why you're not happy with the way it worked out?

But, I loved it! Not only did Leggy save the day, but so did ERESTOR! Yes, that beautiful dark haired Elf that has captured my heart saved Elrond's life (therefore also Legolas' and Glorfindel's for surely they would fade if their lover died), so, technically, if it weren't for him and him alone, (and, well, maybe the mudslide that stopped them from getting there on time), all Elves would be dead, and Ungoliant would posses the Ring for surely she would at least swallow it as she eats Thranduil's body.

Well, no, I never did read that story. Ihad a teacher that read it to me though. Yeah, the grasshopper plays all summer while the ants work. Something about hard work pays off later (ants), but laziness always pays off now (grasshopper). So when winter came the grasshopper had nothing to eat. An ant took him in for the season, and after 3 months together, the grasshopper ged ged his ways and became like an ant and never played all summer ever again. I think that's right. It has been a good 13 years since I last had it spoken to me.

Anyway, apart from all the elves that we don't know of, everyone's alive (well, the main characters, which is what I was getting at), well, at least,... for now *dun dun dun!* Hmmm, will Glorfindel snap out of it? Will Thranduil give Elrond his ring of power back? Will Erestor top or bottom? All in the next eing ing chapter of 'A Healing Touch'. (well, hopefully all in the next chapter, though I'm willing to wait a while longer for the last one. Absence only makes the heart grow fonder, so I'll no doubt love whatever you happen to do with him, even if it is absoultely shit. (not that I expect it to be, just saying)).

Luv Mawgy

P.S. I'm so ashamed of this, but who's Narofea? I know that name, well, I think I do. Wait,... he's the dragon you idiot! (*cowers* just kidding, honest) Well, thanks, but no thanks. I would prefer an Elf, if that's alright with you. Somehow that seems to appeal to me much more. Besides, (not that I'm stating this as a challenge for you to try and achieve), I'd like to know how a dragon is supposed to give head without burning off the poor elf's cock? Besides, to a dragon Erestor would be puny, so Narofea would get no pleasure out of it, and he would be too large for Erestor. The best way I can see Erestor helping out were if he bottomed, but instead of Narofea being inside him, (Which would *literally* split him in two) Erestor would have to wrap his whole body around the dragonhood and slide up and down on it. So, sorry, but, while I'd like to see how that could be done, I don't think it would really fit into the whole 'feeling' of this story. But, hey, you're the author, do what you want (even though you seem to be doing a lot that I want), I'll no doubt love it anyway.

OHIT!HIT! Well, haven't I just made the biggest fool of myself? Narofea isn't the dragon, it's Legolas' childhood friend! Hey, Ash, could you please just do me one of two little favours? Either forget everything I just said in my last review, or squish me (sorry, just been watching A Bug's LIfe). BUt, you get the general idea. OK? Please? Thanks.

Luv Mawgy

The Byrds sang that song, although it was written by P.F. Sloan, in case you are still wondering. I am sure others have covered ind Ind I liked this chapter, why didn't you?

Ohhh...you are so gonna pay for this !!! But you PROMISED that you won’t kill anyone, remember ?
And Haldir is not really a bad guy. Besides who could ever resist Leggy’s charms ? I like him in your story. Like I said, he’s just like me :D
I’m glad the battle is over. I don’t like battles, wars and stuff like that. I just hope that now, that they got rid of the spider bitch, you won’t finish the story.

*hugs you* Thanks for not keeping me uspeuspense any longer!
And I don't know why you are not satisfied with this chapter, for me it was great -go Legolas!

Isis

Wow.. i missed a whole lot huh? Been studying for MCAS. Well this is deffinatly a turn around, Glorfindel... hehe ^^. Uh yea... don;t let him die... he's actaully cooler than Elrond!

Silent Archer

I don't know why you would not be pleased with ch. 23. It was amazing, with a lot of stuff going on, and full of heroic deeds. The image of Legolas on the spider's back was very well done. My favorite part was the ending. I love seeing Legolas caring for an injured Elrond, even if it is from merely physicantacntact. It is a lovely scene. Thank you for such a timely update!