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for Unforgotten

by Nyssa

person Julia
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bloody d**n .... this chapter is so great, and it leaves off just when it promises to get really interesting - don't those two know that life is short and time ld nld not be wasted? What _are_ they waiting for, an engraved invitation?

**grumblegrumblegrumble**

And now I'll have to wait for the next update....
Lemon scene? Pretty please?
person Julia
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oww, what an evil cliff-hanger! Like the chapter (only Eowyn was kind of... like you had to write her but didn't like her much). Hope you'll update soon.
person jilly
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Nyssa,

Hi, honey. I know I told you this when I first beta'd this chapter, but it bears repeating. This is such an amazing departure for you. I'm usually an all-Elf gal as you know, but with two such lovely warriors as the main characters in this fic, I'm happy to make an exception. *g* The tension between these two is palpable and quite delicious.

Keep up the great work, sweetie!

Your friend,
Jilly
person Julia
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh joy, you're writing a new story... *very happy*.

I like the way you're doing Boromir, a bit bigmouthaybeaybe but anything but dumb. The pairing is promising, the tension so far, and the respective "how does _he_ feel about that incident" riveting, and I'll probably be looking out for an update dayly.
person sueb
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I do like the first person telling of this, it is a difficult medium, but i have always found it brings a different, fresher dimension to a fic. An interesting pairing, both skilled warriors but with different expectations placed on them. looking forward to reading more
person ArchNemesis
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~