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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, you stopped *there*??? Such a wonderful passionate yet tender set-up- more please, soon!
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You write great, with the details and the slow (!) build-up, and I like the way you give credit to it that not every man (certainly not every man as macho as Eomer) is ready to get topped without hesitation. And I'm resigning myself to the fact that this story is probably an experiment on how long a slash scene can be drawn out. My guess is 20 chapters.
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*groan*
You do know how to keep us in suspence!! Ten chapters of sexual tension and the haven't even done 'it' yet...you're good :)
You do know how to keep us in suspence!! Ten chapters of sexual tension and the haven't even done 'it' yet...you're good :)
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The sexual tension between these two is perfect. I so enjoyed the incredible build up, it was like I was there. Well Done.
“Not so fast”, he whispers softly, and there is tenderness not only in his voice but also in his eyes as our gazes meet. I can tell that he can read the doubts and concerns and, I admit, also the sudden unease in my face, but I don’t dare say anything. Motionless I lie under his heavy, heated body and await his reaction.
I also await his reaction with baited breath.What an agonizing point to leave us at! Please update soon I cannot restrain my impatience to find out where you will lead these two stunning men and how.
“Not so fast”, he whispers softly, and there is tenderness not only in his voice but also in his eyes as our gazes meet. I can tell that he can read the doubts and concerns and, I admit, also the sudden unease in my face, but I don’t dare say anything. Motionless I lie under his heavy, heated body and await his reaction.
I also await his reaction with baited breath.What an agonizing point to leave us at! Please update soon I cannot restrain my impatience to find out where you will lead these two stunning men and how.
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you aren't planing to do anything cruel like, for example, leaving the two in this state? Seriously, the Tokowhá styou you started is very promising, but I hope you'll finish this one. Pretty please.
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**drums her fingers on the desk**
**purses her lips**
You _are_ enjoying this, aren't you. "I cannot wait any longer" my ass.
Incidently, the scene is red-hot. Do tell, you plan to make it to twenty chapters?
**purses her lips**
You _are_ enjoying this, aren't you. "I cannot wait any longer" my ass.
Incidently, the scene is red-hot. Do tell, you plan to make it to twenty chapters?
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh!!!!! Very hot! Can't wait for the next chapters!!!
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UST:= Unresolved Sexual Tension. The kind of story which has you yelling "shag already, will ya!" at your computer screen. Like this one, darn it. Congrats for managing to keep this up for, oh, about three chapters by now. Good use of background info, and I like the thoughtfulness Boromir shows.
Shag already, will ya!
Shag already, will ya!
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February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please and soon! The thought of these two together is so unbelieveably hot, and you write them so well. Hot, hot, hot, update soon, please
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December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! What an unexpected pairing, I never would have thought of them together, but they are oh so delicious! Please continue and make it as dirty as possible!