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for The Crux of the Problem

by Shanastay

person Alex
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I need to read more!
person Princess Shido
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sex in ballet shoes...I'll have to try that.;)
person Miss Independent3
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! awesome chapter upadte as usual. As if I've comeexpeexpect anything else from you! lol. how in the worlld do you keep multiple stories going at the same time? sheesh. I'm so glad your not homeless anymore. you had me worried there for awhile. well, I'll be wng fng for your next update, ttyl! --Mel(Miss Independent3)
person KnowInsight
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*hugs* I'm glad your so happy luv.
Thanks for that. *smirks*
As always I look forward to more of your work. =)
Cheers.
Am ^_^
person thala (NSI
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you updated!! I'm so happy! I thought when you said that you were homeless we would never get to read anything from you ever again! I'm glad you've found a new home! No one should go without a roof over their head. Thanks for not forgetting all your readers with your hectic life, and take all the time you need in updating!
person ACE
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! please leep it going!
person sweetazzhoney
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty good, i hope to see more.
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm love making water scenes are always yummy! ^_^
person Elendili
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please...keep writing and don't change a thing!!!!! You mentioned that you may revise this after it is completed. NO!!!!! It acts as a stand alone piece, and is perfect. I love the use of songs, I always have a soundtrack going through my head! I relate to songs. This story is so much more than sex (although thatAMAZAMAZING!!!)
Thank you for sharing your talent...this story has been a gift in more tha than you'll know.
person AmberRose
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wait... i'm confused!!! I thought Janessa was with Legolas... and now she's with Haldir? Hurm..... I will have to wait for your conclusion. :)