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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! I wish I was better at writing reviews. I sometimes feel I don't do the story justice. I loved the part where she followed the water droplet down his body. What a luscious visual *sigh* And I quote Sonia "that just slays me." The way he waited for her to finish her appraisal of him before drying off, not afraid to let her drool to her heart's content...completely comfortable in his perfect nakedness. *drool.......swoon.....THUD*
Seeing Haldir come to the reationtion that he loves her and then voicing it in song was yet another very intriguing side to the arrogant Marchwarden we love so much. Perfect songs for every occasion, as usual. //Harder to Breathe indeed// LOL. Is it hot in here? I think it's hot in here. I feel another THUD coming on.
Having her break down and nearly fall apart at that time was somewhat painful to read, but necessary. I definitely agree with the twins, and Haldir would wan want her keeping anything like that from him. Love the "nancing" comments regarding Legolas.
Your poem gives me goosebumps no matter now many times I read it! Amazing!
Talasi
Haldir Worshiper, Wanton Elfbanger, and Keeper of Erestor's Heart
Seeing Haldir come to the reationtion that he loves her and then voicing it in song was yet another very intriguing side to the arrogant Marchwarden we love so much. Perfect songs for every occasion, as usual. //Harder to Breathe indeed// LOL. Is it hot in here? I think it's hot in here. I feel another THUD coming on.
Having her break down and nearly fall apart at that time was somewhat painful to read, but necessary. I definitely agree with the twins, and Haldir would wan want her keeping anything like that from him. Love the "nancing" comments regarding Legolas.
Your poem gives me goosebumps no matter now many times I read it! Amazing!
Talasi
Haldir Worshiper, Wanton Elfbanger, and Keeper of Erestor's Heart
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT!!!!
MORE MORE MORE!!!
Haldir is the best and If I were Janessa I would not think twice about dumping Legolas. But after reading the story The Forsaken, it seems that Hal and Jan won't be together in the end of this tale *snif*
Linkin Park is wonderful and I love when you use their lyrics to set the mood in your stories.
Until the next chapter :)
Kwannom
MORE MORE MORE!!!
Haldir is the best and If I were Janessa I would not think twice about dumping Legolas. But after reading the story The Forsaken, it seems that Hal and Jan won't be together in the end of this tale *snif*
Linkin Park is wonderful and I love when you use their lyrics to set the mood in your stories.
Until the next chapter :)
Kwannom
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
M'lady Shana,
I have been absorbing your fics Twisted, Crux, and Two Much. I say absorbed because to call it simple reading is a vast understatment, my apologies for not reviewing in the past, But decided that I would just simply have to tell you how much I love your writings.
the writings are whitty emotional, suspenseful, and totally enjoyable to the mind's feast.
I like how you are making the three separate stories into their own story.
I hope that you keep writing and gifting up with these treasures of your imagination.
Sincerely
Gypsy.
P.S. I heard a rumor that you would be writing a story with Jan and Good Ol' Glorfindel? I hope so, there just are not enough fics out there with that beautiful elf.
I have been absorbing your fics Twisted, Crux, and Two Much. I say absorbed because to call it simple reading is a vast understatment, my apologies for not reviewing in the past, But decided that I would just simply have to tell you how much I love your writings.
the writings are whitty emotional, suspenseful, and totally enjoyable to the mind's feast.
I like how you are making the three separate stories into their own story.
I hope that you keep writing and gifting up with these treasures of your imagination.
Sincerely
Gypsy.
P.S. I heard a rumor that you would be writing a story with Jan and Good Ol' Glorfindel? I hope so, there just are not enough fics out there with that beautiful elf.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! This was fun. What a way to start the day!
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha someone is getting a little dirty...good stuff...lol
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I likes... But what about Legolas? I hope he isn't mad. He sd bed be a good sport about it if you ask me.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe
*much inane gigling ensues while Aranel collapses on the floor whimpering 'More More!'*
*much inane gigling ensues while Aranel collapses on the floor whimpering 'More More!'*
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you can top THIS chapter??!!?
I'd love to see you try!
Keep writing because I assure you, this coeasieasily become addictive :)
a fan,
~ Elerrina Rose
I'd love to see you try!
Keep writing because I assure you, this coeasieasily become addictive :)
a fan,
~ Elerrina Rose
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great going. Please send chap 2 to me. I'm dying to know what happens. Also, don't stop with chap 3. I now that Glad and Jan are up to no good and am dying to find out how Celeborn and Haldir cope with being upstaged.
Dinah
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
my my my was that good! I'm surprised Janessa screamed the right name. lol How I managed to eat and read the same time isoundound me. :) Now I have to wonder how Legolas's reaction to that was. Did he feel it etc. :) Guess I'll have to read the next chapter to find out huh?!! oh and the writing was very good, no errors. :)
Brenda
Brenda