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for The Crux of the Problem

by Shanastay

person Kirah
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm mad at you. You do NOT make a series- a series that I have loved for a very, very long time- and then just CHANGE the pairing! You have been developing the Legolas/Jan pairing since the very beginning of Twisted, and then in 12 little chapters you completely tore it apart. Well written, as always. This is not a flame. I guess. No, I don't want to flame you, because you don't deserve it, and I give you credit for being untraditional. But people who break the mold always get other angry at them, and, unfortunately, I cannot help but be one of the ones who disaproves.
person MarzBar
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a fabulous chapter! She chose Haldir at last. I think I would have made the same choice should I have been so fortunate. What fun have you dreamed up for us now?
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*pokes* well post it already!!! :D

Poor Legolas, well I guess he should have expected something like this happening when he let his lover have fun in another's bed. Playing with fire and all that. *huggles* great chapter once more and I can't wait to see what is in the next one!

*goes off in search of Thranduil*
person serenityblack2000
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Twin Cliffies! I'm hanging on the edge of my seat, biting my nails and before you know it, I'll be pulling my hair out!! AAAAAAHHHHHHH!

*Phew* *wipes brow* It's ok, I'm fine now. LOVE IT AS ALWAY

Trying to wait patiently for the next update......Soon?

Please! ;)

SB
person sugarplum
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the updates on this one! Glad to finally have something new to read from you. Please update your Domination one! Its just so WILD! Hope things are going better for you and life is treating you like it finally should.
person MarzBar
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhangers in a smut story? Interesting development. I spent time wondering what the last cliffie was about but I think I'll let this one go until you tell us. More story please.
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*whaps Thandy again* Tehehee! He's all mine!

Yummy dance moves and good tie in with the music lyrics, as always. :) *sniffles* poor Haldir getting beat up by Celeborn though he did deserve a quick kick in the arse. hahaha! Ooh but I do wonder who we have waiting on the sidelines this time!
*bounces off to wait for revealing chappie and drags Thandy with her again*
person serenityblack2000
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaahhhhhhh! *mouth hanging open* SHANA!! Cliffie!! Evil, Evil thing! I just re-read from the beginning, I just had to. Could not help myself! Ya know I love it! Its wonderful, erotic, exciting and now a Cliffie!! aaaahhhhhh!

Serious tho, I really enjoy your writing. Janessa has to be one of my alltime favorite charaters. She's kick ass yet...needs a big strong elf in her life. (couldn't we all use one, I could) LOL Oh yea! Anywho, please continue, and soon, I gotta know if my suspisions are true. Its Lego, that yells no, I just know it and what of that vision in the mirror, If she dies (better not or I'm coming to find you). I cant wait to see what happens next! What next, What next, What next???

Great Job
Serenityblack2000
person MarzBar
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the evil cliffie! Is Legolas the mystery watcher? Has her time come to make her choice?
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yummy!!! welcome back and such! Can't wait to see what happens after this cliffie with Legolas. I had a feeling he would show sooner or later. Enticing as always m'dear!