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person louise_oblique
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter

huggs
louise
person janet
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this series is coming along wonderfully! i will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :) all i can say is: excellent, excellent work.
person mike
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this series. It is well written and has a plot that carries along nicely. Thanks!
person morgana
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
really a great story!
thank you for updating so often... and PLEASE continue like this :))
person louise_oblique
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo! looking forward to the next chapter

huggs
louise
person spiffy
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It has been a rare treat watching this story evolve. You have a wonderful imagination and a fine command of language.
I love your characterizations of Legolas, the twins, and theisortsorted family members. They are all beautifully portrayed.
It is SO annoying when writers turn them into weak idiots! These beings were meant to be warriors and the founders and
builders of a great civilization and there seem to be only a handful of writers in fandom who recognize and acknowledge
these traits. Naturally, we love it when the elves also show themselves to be sadly vulnerable and fallible in their loves,
hates, and prejudices. Hot sex is great, but it is even more enjoyable when there is some discernable activity going on
between their ears! Thank you for your hard work on an excellent tale. Please, please continue . . .
person Anita
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought Thranduil would explode or something like that...I have read to many fics where he is a not so kind father!

*picks up 'The Hobbit'*

Now that is the real Thranduil :)

Anyway, very nice job there with the father-son dialogue. I only hope Legolas will choose the right thing to do, something which he is comfortable with. And yes, we would like to see everything turns out alright with Elrohir and Legolas jumping eachother (or something like that :) ), but if it doesn't work with the story and the conditions you set then I don't mind.
This als already been a wonderful serie...even without the rating for which I started reading this!
person Aly
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EEP! So what is Legolas going to do? What will Elrohir do? You left me asking to many question! Good thing you update fast. ;) Can't wait for more.
person gwil
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love this story. Poor Elrohir, suffering so much! Noble Legolas, willing to do anything for his fr!
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This has got to be one of the best series out there. I can't wait to read what happens next, yet at the same time I want this to go on forever!
Please update soon 'cause I'm on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!
person viewerv
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. Please, next chapter soon.