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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I must confess, I was absolutely hooked from the very first chapter (Not to mention the blue wine...). This story has me fervently hoping for the twins in the last movie, but that's not the point. Your story flows absolutely beautifully and your characterizations nearly mirror what's in my thoughts. It's not everyday that I find a story that has me obsessing about the next chapter while at work; and I have read more stories than I can remember. The tension that you have built throught the progression of your story is amazing. I could prattle on and on about how much I *adore* your story, but I must go read it again!
Much, much praise and admiration,
Pervy Elf
Much, much praise and admiration,
Pervy Elf
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
so funny!
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
"The first time!?" *bg*
Luckily the 'morning after' turned out quite all right, again a very well dialogue between Elrohir and Legolas.
I see there you will continue in the next part (duh...that's what people usually do in the next part...*hits herself on the head*) Anyway :)...I will wait for the next storyline! And with you, the wait is never long *g*
Luckily the 'morning after' turned out quite all right, again a very well dialogue between Elrohir and Legolas.
I see there you will continue in the next part (duh...that's what people usually do in the next part...*hits herself on the head*) Anyway :)...I will wait for the next storyline! And with you, the wait is never long *g*
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
First, you may want to go back and edit. Your italics went alot further then I'm guessing you meant them too, and it's really hard on the eyes.
But other then that, I really like how you handled the whole situation. The fact that Legolas and Elrohir didn't immediately go into the "oh I love you" stuff and that Thranduil, though not exactly pleased with what Legolas did, he was willing to accept and still love him. I've really enjoyed how you've written Thranduil.
Looking forward to the next part!
But other then that, I really like how you handled the whole situation. The fact that Legolas and Elrohir didn't immediately go into the "oh I love you" stuff and that Thranduil, though not exactly pleased with what Legolas did, he was willing to accept and still love him. I've really enjoyed how you've written Thranduil.
Looking forward to the next part!
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You're right, that was unintentional. Thanks for pointing it out. I fixed the italics. Apologies to everyone for that error.
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for another wonderful story! It was an absolutlely beautiful awakenof Lof Legolas and I love how you portray his relationship with his father. His honesty and frankness with his father is delightful and I love Thranduil's acceptance. I truly cannot wait for the next story.
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Way cool!!!!!!!!!! Brilliant! fantastic! Exceptional!!!! so glad you posted, yaaaaaaaaaaaay! lovely and can't wait for 'aftermath'. sorry short review got to go to uni and still trying to styop hiccuping, lol :)
huggs
louise
huggs
louise
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What will happen next? Surely they can't think this is just a fling.
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
can I get a HELL YEAH!!!!!! I have seen the LIGHT!!! I'm a convert! Exceptionally well written and well done! Thank you for gracing us with your talent!
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh. wow. Words cannot express...
That was so beautiful, so passionate, and so worth waiting for.
I'd write more but I have to go read it again.
That was so beautiful, so passionate, and so worth waiting for.
I'd write more but I have to go read it again.