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for Greenleaf & Imladris 8 - Into Temptation

by MPB

person Sesshyangel
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eresse, (btw, does your name mean anything in the elvish languages?) I was doing the math (pats trusty calculator) and it took over 1300 years for this change in feelings to come about?!?? Yegawds.
person Jayn
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How cute!! Well, I'm afraid of spiders and needles, and i think swords are cool! But I can understand where Legolas's fear is coming from. Poor Elrohir!! Some predicament he's in... On to the next one!! ^_^
person giggle
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love thunderstorms with lots of lightning and I wish I could have been in Rivendell because this one sounded great. I had never thought about the protection that the caves of the king's stronghold and the dense canopy of trees would give but it makes sense.
I did like Elrohir's protective arms for a scared not so very young elf. Yummy thought that he has an armful of pale, blond, scrumptious elf. This does seem to be having consequences for him though.
Yep. Let's go get Elladan so he can give whatever aid Elrohir needs at this point.
I really loved Elladan's reaction of confusion. What is going on here? After all Elrohir wasn't being very lucid at the moment. Onoce Elladan saw theproblem he reacted with commendable care.
So Elrohir finally sees what his twin has suspected all along that he deeply desires Legolas in a way he can't even comprehend. They are best friends and you don't lust after your best friend. I married my best friend and it has been great.
Now Elrohir has to figure out what changed. Why did this happen? Is he just desiring the prince for his base needs? I am glad that Elladan could point out to him that he has never been base in his relationships and he doubts that his brother would start now with their friend. A voice of calm reason for Elrohir who is being neither calm nor reasonable.
I loved the wedged in so tight he almost knocked Legolas over when he got "uncorked."
This would alter his life beyond anything he'd ever imagined. You have no idea Elrohir. giggle
person kirameki
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I found it so cute that our brave fearless Legolas was brought to an adorable lingling mass by a thunder storm. And that was also a wonderful way to intoduce Elrohir's new burgeoning feelings for his friend. Ohohohoho... Things beg beginning to get interesting, yes they are.
person Lupusdragon
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Finally! Now, what is to be done about poor ignorant Legolas. I am afraid he won't take it well... of course, this is an Elrohir/Legolas story, so I guess he will accept it sooner or later. And then there is what will his father think. So much angst for such a comely Elf, it isn't fair.
person Anita
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*bg*

That was actually very entertaining and I can certainly see why Elladan finds it amusing at times :)
Anyway, as I see the title for the next chapter...is Elrohir going to do something with his feelings?
person Ray
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is good! I love this story arc and seeing how Elrohi fee feelings for Legolas are developing and growing. I enjoyed ElroElrohir angst and want to see more!
person gwil
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful story! Thank you so much for getting them out so quickly, otherwise the suspence would kill me. I love the slowly progressing nature of the relationship, watching it beautifully unfold. I can't wait for the next story.
person Aly
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Elrohir finally admitted to himself and Elladan how he feels about Legolas. Now just to figure out how to get Legolas to like him. ;) Can't wait for the next part!
person louise_oblique
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. quite quite fantastic. looking forward to the next update. very sweet though quite compromising. really excited about next chapters. yes wondering when slash will come in ;)

huggs
louise