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I really really do like the connection idea with Legolas and Janessa. I have to wonder if she has any connections of her own to legolas. Also, good scene with legolas and practicing his bow and sword. :) Guess only time will tell what you write next in your next chapters. Keep writting, you are really really good.
Brenda

Isonasonally think that Legolas would already have any affinaity with his weapons, like they were part of him, to be as good as he is. However, I will let it go and see where your taking this. For this is truely interesting to say the least. This is one of the more unique pieces I've run across in a while. Thanks for the good story. Please continue. Am ^_^

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Good chap.
More please.
Am ^_^

well it only took me two hours to read! don't worry it's not you. It's friends being annoying and causing problems when I was in the middle of reading something and trying to write something else at the same time. er Good chapter. I have to say, the sad part with the song perfect, totally fits my mood which perhaps is why it made me even so much as cry. OMG I got a poster of Legolas for my room! lol :) well talk to you next time we're both at work and the fire isn't causing problems. blah (hey but no school for me... who who knows who else doesn't have school)
Brenda :) *whom went from sad to happy in 3.2 seconds lol*

Great story. The only thing is I think that Legolas might have already had a connection with his weapons, him being an elf and all... but it will be interesting to see where you are going with this.

I take it you have been to military school...Can you really do archery? You sound very informed about the subject. That is really cool.

Keep up the good work.

Wow! That was... intense.
Good chap luv.
I hope to see more soon.
Am ^_^

Yeah, I like it!!
Keep updating!!

oh my! That was really good how you connected this chapter to the last! I see what you were telling me about Legolas taking some of her pain etc. etc. It seems with you connecting the two, that they are getting closer, realm wise. I must say again, lastt wat was wonderful, chapter was good, but last part just made it great! :) That's because of the connecting and be able to write the person's point of view without it being boring. Update when you can, when you have time. :)
Brenda
p.s. guess no ever after tonight lol only close to two am.

That song reach had some very nice words in it. It's too bad I've never heard it before. That or I have and just don't remember. They seem to fit ery ery well wite ste story. Some of the lyrics you can see why it could mean something to Janessa just from reading the other chapters.
The poem, that was very good too. It had alot of emotion in it. Especially the last line "Someone. Get me Out!" That's something that most people say at one time in their life. did you write this poem yourself? I'm sure you did, as it sounds like it does, since it fits the way you write. Did you write it as you wrote this chapter or did you write it years ago?
That last scene with Janessa and Tim! wow! that was intense! it was written well to. It was like I wasn't reading anymore even though I was, but rather watching a scene from a movie. Who ever told you that you have talent, is right, you do. :) Keep writing, and do keep in touch! :)
Brenda

*smirks*