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Nope, seems she can't get a break. That's just Got to hurt though!
Holding
>your entire Body weight on one dislocated arm. Ow... PLease update
soon!

I really like how you don't have the elves automatically understanding
her
>language, and mostly the same for Jan (she doesn't understand the full
>Sindarin language). This will make for some very interesting
interaction,
>I think! I'm still very excited about this story, Shana, it only gets
>better with every chapter!

Bwah, I love it. It's aways fun when soe gee gets dropped into
>Middle-Earth. Someone should just write a FanFic containing various
>snippits of different people's reactions to falling into
>Middle-Earth...Speaking of which, excellent way to have her arrive -
smack
>dab in the middle of a group of the most important elf-lords of
Imladris,
>and flat on her face. The nose breaking was just the crowning, though
>painful, touch...
>
>Yes, as if you hadn't guessed, I really really liked this chapter.
>Probably because A) it's late and B) it's the lightest and more
humourous
>chapter so far. It's very good, at any rate. Keep up the good work -
I
>shall be waiting for updates, either on this or 'For Thine is the
Glory'.
>*nodnod*
>
>-CS

You know what I think....but I'll tell you again anyways. LOVE IT! I hate cliffhangers, but this is an excellent addition to a wonderful story! At least she is ME now. Whew!

The twist of English not being Westron puts another spin on things too. Could things be more complicated for poor Jan? I think not. Pretty good idea......if I do say so myself. :D (Not my idea....just inspired by me)

The realization that they are picking up on each others thoughts and feelings is also well portrayed. You get across how confusing it is for both of them.

Of course, Jansenssense of humor just kills me. "Hello. Kinda dead here." ROFLMAO Always and forever a smart ass. Flipping off the Valar was priceless too. Typical Jan. Can't imaging where she gets that from. *looks at Shana*

Talasi
Haldir Worshiper, Craig Parker swooner, and Keeper of Erestor's Heart

She really can't getreakreak in this chapter, can she? You really have a gift for evening the mix of strength and vulnerability in this character. Her appearance in middle earth this way was brilliant!

Well done, once again. Looks like we're almost to the point where these two will finally meet face-to-face. Can't wait for that. *S* Always looking for more.

OY!! For about a half a second...my heart stopped because I had thought you ended it there! But you said there will be more and more is what I crave!

GIVE IT TO ME KNOW!!!

Ok....I'll wait....but only because you are a fantastic writer!

Please send more as soon a possible.

SB

Yay! *dances around* Shana updated! :D :D Stunning descriptions! While I can imagine how confusing it is for the elves, and even Legolas who is seeinis, is, I am not lost myself. Quite an accomplishment to confuse and simplify at the same time. Their reactions are realistic. The parts that come through Legolas are just enough to confuse the elves and clue us in on what he is seeing.

(Of course, I also love being in the credits, especially when I am tossed over the shoulder of an elf and carried off to do naughty things......GO ME !!! )

*Bows to the mastah*

Tal

very good chapter. i think you got the vision like trances across pretty well.
-sofia

OK, so I just not got around to reading this. Well done, yet again. I'll be sure to read the next update more quickly. *S*