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Is military assaults against innocent women in America actually devised?

LuthienTinuviel said
> Is military assaults against innocent women in America actually devised?

Authoress' response:
To my knowledge assaults against women are not planned by the military. However a report recently issby tby the joint chiefs of staff indicated that commanders are aware of assaults and do nothing to punish the offenders and in fact punish the victims fominoming forward. That is not speculation, it is substantiated fact. In the story I took the findings of that report a step further, hence the story is fiction. The attack in question in the story actually happened to me and new information has come to indicate I was specifically targeted, but not necessarily at the direction of the military
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Please feel free to contact me if you or anyone else have any further questions.

Thank you...

And the story's good, really. I've always preferred the more realistic non-blubby type tales. They're both (bubbly + non-bubbly) equally enjoyable, but these sort always lead to more food for thought.

i soooo can not wait to get her to middle earth and have our lovelies meet!! please update soon.. i am in dire need here.. lol.. thanks wren

Geez, could anything else happen to this poor woman? I'm hoping that the snap that she heard and felt isn't what I think it is...that would be horrible!

I love your writing style. The song breaks are great, and always seem to fit the mood perfectly. I hope you'll be posting the next chapter soon...I can't wait to find out what happens.

Keep up the good work

Michelle

Yay! *dances around* Shana updated! Stunning descriptions! While I can imagine how confusing it is for the elves, and even Legolas who is seeing this, I am not lost myself. Quite an accomplishment to confuse and simplify at the same time. Their reactions are realistic. The parts that come through Legolas are just enough to confuse the elves and clue us in on what he is seeing.

(Of course, I also love being in the credits, especially when I am tossed over the shoulder of an elf and carried off to do naughty things......GO ME )

*Bows to the mastah*

Tal

Wow! Masterfully done! I can understand why this chappie was so long in coming. It was a difficult concept to get across, but you succeeded with flying colors. I found it a little eery 'seeing' things unfold third person. You said you'd wanted to give it a disjointed feeling. . . Oh, yeah, you nailed that but good. The feelings of lack of control and helplessness were almost palpable.

BRAVA!

Wow this is a great plotline! I think the story is going fine but I
think
>you should describe the scenery a little bit more. I always forget to
do
>that in my writing. Are the Prince and her going to meet? You know if
they
>actually do, you could have them just be friends.
>Please update soon!

I love this story. Please update soon

Ahh so it all becomes clear why Jan is so scared of Haldir. Glorfindel
is
>ever portrayed as regally and wise as he should be thrown in with a
lil
>good mischief. Love the "darkling" description for Elrond etc.