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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry you are feeling disappointed that you haven't been getting enough reviews. Don't let that affect your writing though. Write for yourself and your own enjoyment (ok ok and mine too! ;) ). Everyone one is on their own trip and sometimes people cannot review or not being writers, don't understand how much a review can affect the writer. Before I started writing fic, I would devour stories but left almost zero reviews. I was greatly enjoying the stories and anxiously awaiting updates but didn't understand how much that review could mean to the writer.
Ok on the the review - short but nice. I like see the same scene from different perspectives. Keep it up (ha ha ha)
the earth guide
Ok on the the review - short but nice. I like see the same scene from different perspectives. Keep it up (ha ha ha)
the earth guide
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I care!!! While I certainly wouldn't mind keeping you to myself, getting stories via E-mail, I believe it would definitely be a waste for you not to continue. I am, of course, partial to Ties, but Twisted is helping me with a few of my own demons, and I'm sure we are not alone in that. Please continue. E says pretty please, with whip cream and a cherry on top (oops,fereferent story). he he
Wanton Elfbanger
Wanton Elfbanger
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are providing an invaluable service....delivering absolutely delicious elf sex with a really good story as well. You are talented. Please continue.
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I CARE!
Really like your story and i really want to know what the twins are going to do!
Yes its true, you are a godess - so please dont stop writing!
PLEASE! PLEASE? I CARE - REALLY I DO
Really like your story and i really want to know what the twins are going to do!
Yes its true, you are a godess - so please dont stop writing!
PLEASE! PLEASE? I CARE - REALLY I DO
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! The excitement is starting to build!! I wanna know what happens next!!
When when when!!
( As for a side note! its just plain rude to read and not review. At least people can do is say something *no flames allowed*If you hated it that bad ... Fine.... We don't want to hear from you anyway. An Author should not have to beg reviews. Especially talanted authors. Shana is talanted and you should be ashamed not to atleast drop a friendly note! Hell you could just type four letters *keep it clean now.... remember no flames** Or you will have me to deal with!* Letters such as
"Good" or "Nice" or "Neat" COME ON PEOPLE WE WANT TO HEAR FROM YOU!
When when when!!
( As for a side note! its just plain rude to read and not review. At least people can do is say something *no flames allowed*If you hated it that bad ... Fine.... We don't want to hear from you anyway. An Author should not have to beg reviews. Especially talanted authors. Shana is talanted and you should be ashamed not to atleast drop a friendly note! Hell you could just type four letters *keep it clean now.... remember no flames** Or you will have me to deal with!* Letters such as
"Good" or "Nice" or "Neat" COME ON PEOPLE WE WANT TO HEAR FROM YOU!
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok. Ok. Here's your review. *S*
I skipped over this story for quite some time simply because "I've landed in ME" stories have, for the most part, lost much of their appeal to me. Then I read The Crux of the Problem (youckedcked me with the summary *S*) and realized that Crux was an arc of another story, this story, that you were also writing. I read Crux, then began this one and have also read the other arcs you've written. And they're all very good. It would be a shame if you didn't continue to share them.
Now for the actual review. *S*
Janessa is an interesting character. Being pierced (twice) and inked (once) myself, I can relate to her somewhat. I've always enjoyed a female lead character who is strong in her own right. She doesn't have to be a "warrior woman" to be strong, though Janessa is certainly both. Janessa's biggest strength, though, is her determination to fight her own battles, whether they be physical or emotional. That is what holds the most appeal for me. There are only so many times I can read those "Oh, good. I've landed in ME, now the big strong male can fix it all for me" stories. Janessa doesn't want someone to "fix" things for her.
"The Problem is in Hand" was a wonderful chapter. It's nice to have drama and intrigue broken up with a little humor now and then. We all need to smile from time to time. Aragorn and Arwen were always such serious characters. I love it when they're given a sense of humor...and a twisted one at that! And I cannot *wait* to see what the twins and Legolas do to them.
I'm curious about the silk that Legolas seems to constantly neeMaybMaybe I missed the explanation of its significance. If not, I'm sure you'll clue us in sooner or later. Either way, it's a nice touch, Legolas' constant need for the comfort it seems to provide.
This is quite possibly the longest review I've ever written. I hope it has helped to eragerage you to continue to share this story with the rest of us as I'd have to have to beg you to send me the chapters in email should you decide to *not* share any longer. I'm not good at begging. *S*
I skipped over this story for quite some time simply because "I've landed in ME" stories have, for the most part, lost much of their appeal to me. Then I read The Crux of the Problem (youckedcked me with the summary *S*) and realized that Crux was an arc of another story, this story, that you were also writing. I read Crux, then began this one and have also read the other arcs you've written. And they're all very good. It would be a shame if you didn't continue to share them.
Now for the actual review. *S*
Janessa is an interesting character. Being pierced (twice) and inked (once) myself, I can relate to her somewhat. I've always enjoyed a female lead character who is strong in her own right. She doesn't have to be a "warrior woman" to be strong, though Janessa is certainly both. Janessa's biggest strength, though, is her determination to fight her own battles, whether they be physical or emotional. That is what holds the most appeal for me. There are only so many times I can read those "Oh, good. I've landed in ME, now the big strong male can fix it all for me" stories. Janessa doesn't want someone to "fix" things for her.
"The Problem is in Hand" was a wonderful chapter. It's nice to have drama and intrigue broken up with a little humor now and then. We all need to smile from time to time. Aragorn and Arwen were always such serious characters. I love it when they're given a sense of humor...and a twisted one at that! And I cannot *wait* to see what the twins and Legolas do to them.
I'm curious about the silk that Legolas seems to constantly neeMaybMaybe I missed the explanation of its significance. If not, I'm sure you'll clue us in sooner or later. Either way, it's a nice touch, Legolas' constant need for the comfort it seems to provide.
This is quite possibly the longest review I've ever written. I hope it has helped to eragerage you to continue to share this story with the rest of us as I'd have to have to beg you to send me the chapters in email should you decide to *not* share any longer. I'm not good at begging. *S*
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT HAPPENS WHAT HAPPENS
AAAAAHHHHHHHGGGGGG!!!
Waiting for more!!!
Legolas and the twins need to really raise some hell
Great fic!
SB
AAAAAHHHHHHHGGGGGG!!!
Waiting for more!!!
Legolas and the twins need to really raise some hell
Great fic!
SB
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January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're not really going to stop right there are you?
Please......
I wanna know what happens next
Please......
I wanna know what happens next
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ego demands, so the reader shall pay. *S* You're a Goddess? No...wait....Keep going? Hmm...still not enough.
Silliness aside, I'm really enjoying this story. The combination of angst with humor thrown in is just the right combination. Angst is all well and good; but without a break in the angst, the mind is sure to explode. You seem to have a good understanding of this. Well done. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Silliness aside, I'm really enjoying this story. The combination of angst with humor thrown in is just the right combination. Angst is all well and good; but without a break in the angst, the mind is sure to explode. You seem to have a good understanding of this. Well done. Can't wait for the next chapter.