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person AmberRose
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well... I don't know what to say. I do believe you were hurt very badly at the USAFA, but I wonder where the line between reality and your release of anger is drawn. I'm glad you've turned to writing. You are very good at it.
Amber Rose
person Serenityblack2000
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was good!! Didn't piss me off as much as I was thinking it would. Still some issues pissed me off.

I like Janessa! she kicks ass!!

Ok now come on I Want more!

Please update soon

SB
person dawnenab
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!! This was a great update. Now you're gonna make me be all whiny and stuff. I want more! More! More! More! *stomps foot like angry child*

Really really love this story. I cannot wait until you get up to the parts that parallel with 'Crux'...*sighs*

Well...I will settle down to a nice little wait. Maybe you'll update Domination or Taming again soon. (yes those were shameless hints)

Thanks for all that you pour into your stories Shana...they are very special.

~Ali
person Elendili
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
((((((Shana)))))))Please accept all the positive energy I am sending you through cyber-space!! This was so well written and I got so swept up inthatthat I am going to have to re-read the chapter! I am now reading everything you have ever written and enjoying it all. Don't stop writing! uh, no pressure! ;)
person dawnenab
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Who knew that something as simple as disclaimers could be so wonderful? I highly recommend that anyone who reads this that hasn't gone back through all the chapters and read the new disclaimers that Shana has given us do so and post haste.

HILARIOUS!!

Plus...it gives incentive to read her other fics...you will want to--I promise!

~Ali
person Mei Tenshi
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story and if it refelcts what had hapened in your life and dealing with it the way you are thats something I would never be able to do ...anyways it's really neat how you put your life exprences in your character and because of that it's really neat. well hope you keep writing 'cause I'm really enjoying it and my opinon if something like that had happened to me I wouldn'tnge nge it but I would try and fight through it as well ....well till next chapter :)
person Anon
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
absolutely wonderful! :D
person Blacn¨ M
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol The twins got them good! Please continue, this story just keeps getting better.

=^.^=
person Larimar
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent! I hope you update soon! I have been following your work and I appreciate your careful attention to detail and imagery. I can't wait to to see what happens next!
person Rainien
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! You finally updated! *S* hehe I like what you did with my suggestion for how the twins and Legolas could get back at Aragorn and Arwen. Very good job!