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Wow! This chapter was incredible. Very unexpected. Can't wait untill she reaches ME. Very exciting. I hope an update comes soon. Keep up the great work.

Wow. That's it. Just wow. My brain is so senseless right now. Oh and about the disclaimer, Glorfindel is Rachel's (and if you don't know who Rachel is, read The Games of the Gods) so, uh, yeah. Like I said, my brain cells are fried. I read this story, and then forget how good it is, and then find out it's been updated, read the new chappie, and don't speak twenty words for twelve hours. Who woulda though this story, dark as it is, would be so addictive?

OMG! I absolutely love this story, its brilliant! I Spent all day reading it and nothing else! It 10x's better because i am so interested in the military and i love it, but this is awesome! Kinda makes you wanna think twice about joining the military...eh. YOU CANT LEAVE IT THERE! Up date again really really soon!! Please? O.O;

Wow.
Jan may have hated Hayden for what he did to her, but I still think Jan will regret and have to come to terms with killing him, though they'll probably be some denial to begin with. =(
*hugs Jan and then the aurthoress* Love ya luvs.
Am

That was definitely a twist in the story. Jan really kicks ass--woohoo! I think it's awesome how you always are able to find a great song lyric to go with the events in the story. Please don't leave us hanging for long...I always look forward to new chaps on your stories. You are such a prolific writer!

So who does Legolas kill in ME?

Wow. That was really well done. What I really like about this story is that is has a plot in both worlds- it shows us why Janessa is who she is in actuality instead of just giving us a watered down explination somewhere in the middle of the story. Thank you for writing.

omg, I remember when you told me about this chapter! lmao! that was great. Love the "Glorfindel!" Excuse me while I continue onto the next chapter. :)
Brenda
p.s. good writing as usual. I could picture it all in my mind, which I'm sure you know by now, but we all know authors love hearing it. :)

oh my! that chapter... wow! a lot of info there. Can't believe that rape and stuff she went though was all a set up. Generally people who rape are bad people but that is worse than bad. Glad one is dead. Tim doesn't seem much better himself. I can't seem to place the second song though...what's it called? and who is it by? I liked the first song by Linkin Park. I've heard it before so I could I see her in my head listining to the song in her head while she was in her own world at the same time. Very very very realitic moment there. (phyical and mental) Will be looking for more. :)
Brenda

Great character development! Remarkable ability to combine humor and real life horror. I'm on to the next one.
Rainy