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person Shayarian Draakami
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love what I've read so far of your fic. The way you porotray you charactor is amazingly realistic, with personality quirks and all. The way you use songs to both put experiences and emotions into perspective is very well done. Thanks you for writing
person Angharad-Muirne-Nsaicsaic
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter. The twins are so mischevous :) It's a great story. You're a wonderful writer.
person Vinter
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! first I would like to bow down to your greatness *bows* =) Second I would like to tell you how good a writer you are. Third, I give you my respect,I respect you because you are strong. *bows once more* Keep it up you are great =)
person isildur\'sbane123
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was really good. oh oh oh now you have me hopping on one foot waiting foe upe update. So if this story is based on real life, do you know how to use a sword? The archery's obviously really cool. Are Jan and Legolas going to meet sometime soon and when will the archery compitition start? This story is the best of your stories that I've read. Keep Writing!
person Wanton Elfbanger
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the most exciting chapter so far in this story. As for what she discovered, *shudders*. *Cringes* No words for that.
She tried to walk away, but Hayden gave her no choice. He deserved it. As for Tim, I think he will have plenty of time to think about his participation in this matter.
Whoopie! On to ME. Can't wait until they finally meet each other. Wonderful chapter, as always.
Tal
Resident Haldir Worshiper and Wanton Elfbanger
person Your Worshipfulness
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the ending and I am SO glad that Hayden is dead! I only wish it could have been more painful! Violence is SO much fun!
~Your Worshipfulness
person trekqueen
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay she killed the bastard!
Didn't expect that, yes, but it was a good not expect that thing. Greatest chapter yet.
*hugs* so everything comes out now, huh?
see you soon!
=/\= TQ
person Ellmarr
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed you story ealier but I've tried but for some reason the damn computer wont let me. That may be also why others haven't reviewed. It's a good story. Are you going to have your OC and Legolas meet up? I cant wait to find out.
person sofia
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... exciting chapters... answered a few things. She must be really shoked that she killed someone.
person elvinears
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woohoo! that was awesome! is she going to meet legolas?