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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO oh my that first half of this story was so funny!! You must of been in a really good mood when you wrote this. geez I wonder why... :-D That second part where this chapter takes a very serious turn reflects that he is having the dreams at the same time as Janessa. It is also very clear, that if you've read the last chapter you know why he's acting like that and where it fits in. Very good chapter, especially with the humor. :)
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is andy. wow, your good. i have alot of work to do before i'm even close to as good. i just read the first chapter, and i can tell already that ur good at this. i would give a critique, but i dont know what to tell you to improve on because i think its already really good. sorry mays i s i get better ill be able to give a useful comment.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*is shocked*
Wow!
That was interesting.
I hope to see more soon.
Tennsan\san' (Until then)...
Am ^_^
Wow!
That was interesting.
I hope to see more soon.
Tennsan\san' (Until then)...
Am ^_^
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh that was a good chapter even if it's a chapter that gets you to the next one. It's worked out well. I'll have to read the next chapter tomorrow since it's too late and I'll have school in the morning. :) I'll be sure to leave a better review tomorrow. :)
Brenda
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cocks an eyebrow* Nice!
Good chap. Really interesting stuff.
I hope to see that nice long chap you've promised before to long. ^_^
Tenna' ento lye omenta ( Unitl next we meet)...
Am ^_^
Good chap. Really interesting stuff.
I hope to see that nice long chap you've promised before to long. ^_^
Tenna' ento lye omenta ( Unitl next we meet)...
Am ^_^
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. That was a great ending to the chapter with Legolas waking up, muttering those words. and they weren't even paying attention to him anymore until he spoke. That must of been a surprise. lol Leaves you wondering what you'll write next. :) She must of did alot hinkhinking compared to talking for Legolas to only mutter "they were murdered." Do write more, as I'm sure you have all the free time. oh and that is so like elrond to be concerned about Legolas before himself. :)
Brenda
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool-cool! this is a great story! write it faster!
lol Can't wait for the next chappie! ^_^
lol Can't wait for the next chappie! ^_^
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Yeah! *giggles*
That was bloody brillant luv.
I can't wait to see Legolas' reactiont to that one. *smirks*
*exhales* Very, very good luv. ^_^
So more please.
Soon please. ^_^
Tenna' ento lye omenta.
Am ^_^
That was bloody brillant luv.
I can't wait to see Legolas' reactiont to that one. *smirks*
*exhales* Very, very good luv. ^_^
So more please.
Soon please. ^_^
Tenna' ento lye omenta.
Am ^_^
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was one detailed chapter with all the violence then to a more settle scene. That dream, fit in nicely into the fic. I think this chapter deserved it's rating alright. sorry it took me so long to read. Been sick :(
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HI i think that was great! i love the part were she says " legolas your hell of a lover." I strated to thing. do i want to see that side of legolas. i'm scared you might make some one watch. But keep up the Good work! I LOVE IT!