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by Shanastay

person amanda (aortiz7@cot.net.net)
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it hot
your story is awesome
person ANONYMOUS
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THIS FANFIC IS AWESOME!
person ashlee
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was so good. do more please!;)
ash
person Angharad-Muirne-Na-Rosaic
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet and hot little scene... I LOVE pillowfights :)
person babmidnight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
inflated? LOL your funny. :) Leave it as fluff. While it's good, I think it'd be better staying fluff. It might just ruin the whole theme going on if you go farther. :) I was reading this one and I realized that this could easily be like the main character Janissa and Legolas in your other fic in here. Though I don't know about her hair color so it may or may not be her sort of thing. :) Of course I liked this chapter. I can only imagine that you wrote this one while looking at the last chapter. :) If you didn't, wow that is soome memory! :)
Brenda
person Angharad-Muirne-Na-Rosaic
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, like I said, Love pillow fights, and to see it from both sides is really cool... Delightfully fun and yummy :)
person Lady Undomiel
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that's hot! Very sweet and hot at the same time. Write more pweese?
~*Lady Undomiel*~
person Hikara
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE! Please..:-D
person Isabel DeVore
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...such...it brings bunnies to my mind. I like.
person Ren
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AH MY GOSH!! This has been so wonderful so far. I'm absolutely enjoying this, (even down the backlash against 'Legolas-hating nimrod' LOL!!).