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by Shanastay

person clara sara
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh...I check in everyday to see if you've updated...this has got to be one of the best of it's kind that I've read! And I've read a lot! Pe upe update really soon!
person Orli\'s babe
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its really good. I have 1 question. Is there going to be a plot or is it just smut?
person legolas\' bride
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it
plz continue it!!
i like how u say 'me' instead of someones name
person Skyler VonDetton
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm likin it ALOT! Update, update, update, update NOW! jk. though soon would be nice.
person Amaunet3177
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it! More More More!
person Austin
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! So intense! Bravo.. you should be a romance novelist.
truly,
austin
person kittynip9
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More. More. More!
person harmony727
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I find it very good. Writing it in first person is really good and you should definetly write more to it.
person Austin
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see a plot. But don't be cheap with the fluff!! lol
your fan,
austin b.
person CalypsoAntigone
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES! Adoreably sexy. I love it, and you know we all love him!