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When I first read the review, I thought it would be a fic about a lady on an all out drunk spree and wakes up with a bad hungover, revealing an elf in her bed.

But this isn't bad. I heard elves can walk on snow, but I wonder if elves can dodge snowballs.

I like the playfulness and humor. I normally like fluff, but not necessarily this time. I'm sorry if that sounds harsh, just being honest. I don't like how each scene has two chapters, one for each point of view. A good writer incorporates both points of view together to make a flowing piece. I hope one day you will consider it. :)

That was nice and detailed I must say. I like the humor, that made it cute in it's own sort of way. :) It was nice how you put in first person point of view, had a very nice affect to this fic. Gave it a nice touch to it. :)
Brenda

I just had to leave another note... sorry Katherine, but I disagree completely. What makes this story work in such a tantalizingly good way IS the separate points of view being in separate chapters. Otherwise, there is no rope to pull us to the next chapter. Each POV has its own unite sensuality that you crave to see the next side of the story just as much as you do the next set of "action" so to speak :). what you suggest Katherine may be a pnal nal preference, but is certainly not the standard or gold seal of a fine writer. Good style matches its story, and I think that this story is more than good :) (Please please please update hon :))

oh my god! you are so good!! you must have had a lot of experience. haha. and those techniques are wonderful, my fiance and i tried a few and they worked miricles!

Quite yummy, I must say. Please continue!

*~*~* Daisy

I must concur with AHSmith, two separate points of view allow the writer to completely engulf the character of the chapter, otherwise, it would be half-hearted and rather lengthy to distinguish between which character is thinking what. A truly unique new way to approach this story, and Hazzah to Mistress Shanastay for yet more heart-racing mind-numbingly pleasurable reading. MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!
p.s. I'm very glad you are no longer wandering...best of luck in all you do!

Pretty good!! i thik its good!

Damn I want him! This was cute. I liked that it ahd a bit of humor and it was in first person which i think was great. Please continue.

wite more... its interesting