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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the alternations between the different POV's. It draws the story out more and and adds a bit more meat to it. This is a great piece, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! What a story!!
Continue, please! I want to see what she'll do to him...
Continue, please! I want to see what she'll do to him...
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD, girl that fic is GUD, please, please, please keep writing!!the way you describe the scene in sooo much detail and the way ur writing just flows is amazing, and very hard to find, ur almost transported to that very room, its just fantastic.i eagarnticnticipate the next chapter****
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't belive I haven't read this before! WOW!!! He is more than good... Legolas POV's are so nice... I loved the line 'little brat', it was so fuuny. Please, continue with this. What is she going to do with THAT elf??? Wow...
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yo. Great story so far. Please don't leave it as fluff. Explain why she has suffered as legolas said in the 2nd chapter. I love how you set it up with both of their pov. Update soon. ^_^x
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
how could you end it there, that's so cruel.. I like it and I hope you update soon