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by Shanastay

person Sonia
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was recommended to be by my friend, T, and she didn't warn me about any of the contents and should be punished for it! My limited (i.e. non-existant) sexual experience, I had no idea that someone could reach release without even being touched where you're supposed to be touched! So that right there was an experience to read about! *fans self* THEN...not knowing it could get worse, there was HAND ACTION! I'm a major "hand fetish" person. I don't just admire men's hands, but I have a "thing" about my own hands so to read about Legolas doing what he was doing to her fingers...holy Lord!! I had to have a cold shower by the time I was done reading througis eis early this morning, so kudos to you!! Really remarkable description...I swear I could feel everything that was happening like it was happening to me.
person kittynip9
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've just reread the story and was wondering when you were goign to update again. I really, really, want to find out what happens next.
person DragonEyeZ
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*jumps up and down, clapping her hands* Updateupdateupdateupdate!!! Pwetty pwease?
I love the scene! :D It's amazing the way you can change between the two, and yet make it completely drentrent from the previous! So, please, let us see more of this remarkable talent of yours (and let us see what will happen now.. - Leg Legolas take revenge for the slapping?)!
person nywvre
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh WOW!
typically I don't like fics with oc in it.... But this one is amazing! Plz, plz, plz keep writing. I love both the chars already!
person FatihHeart
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved can't wait to read more
person Brazgirl
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MORE
MORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MORE
MORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MOREMORE MORE
ahhhhh I want more! Those two chapters were great! Naughty elf...
More!!! This fic is great! What happens next?
person Your Friendly Neighborhood Sewer Dweller
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy that was good.
Must claim down now or I will. *pouts*
More please oh Goddess of Smutt.
Am ^_^
person YoukoKitsune
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please write more, please
person Talasi
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying all of your stories....especially Crux and Twisted. I am getting some really naughty ideas for torture from them. Please continue. I do believe Iht bht be addicted. I am a pervy elf fancier and especially have a soft spot for Haldir.

Talasi
person Sewer-dweller
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was fun-fucking-tastic!
my favorite part: the spankings, naughty elf
Also very impressive move to bring her on top of him while turning over. =D
More? God yes!
Am ^_^