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"I tear my lips from his, burying my face in theve ove of his neck I cry out my completion, riding his hand with abandon. He stills his movements as the tremors begin to pass, removing his hand from my shorts. I raise my head and watch transfixed as he slowly draws his tongue up one finger before placing it between his lips and drawing it out with an audible "pop." I can't look away as he licks his palm and fingers clean, his midnight gaze holding mine. The simple act was unbelievably erotic."

That WHOLE BIT right there just absolutely DESTROYED me 'cause I happen to have a hand fetish! But this entire chapter had me reeling! I've never felt so exhausted OR satisfied at the end of a piece of fanfic! I'm dying for the rest, bring it on, please!!!

Woew..... I can't bee yoe you are back... and what a return. This is more than fabulous! Oh my... There is no chance this elf exists??? Update soon...

ohhhh! it was positively steaming in here. I love your stories and I hope you can bac back at them soon.

A~R

hj

Shannon! I am so sorry! I hope things gets better for you. Hugs and good luck!

tytr

Cute , very fun to read

I think...no...I know that there are many men that walk this earth who need...nay...should be REQUIRED to read this!

Foreplay is so great. I think this could very nearly be a handbook! LOL

At any rate...my poor hubby will have no clue that his is only a stand-in

MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH (evil laugh)

~Ali

PS: In all fairness....please post updates to both the Books & Movies sections at the same time if you can. I stumbled on this here, and was thrilled to find chapter 6, so in reality it wasn't a bad thing....but the delay kinda sucked...LOL

Cheers!~Ali

Loved! Hadn't realised you'd updated this (DOH!) and love the 2 new chapters. Things getting REALLY steamy now. *suspects may need a towel on the seat for the next bit?* Please provide warnings if so.. *wink* *evil grin*

OH MY GOD!!! You have to write more please!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!

Riss