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by Shanastay

person michelle
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, that was great! I absolutely love the way you captured two perspectives, of the same situation, so amazingingly. You did a fantastic job, and I REALLY hope that you do a follow-up. I'm now devoted fan of yours, and am currently reading a few of your other stories. You are an amazing writer, and I look forward to reading your upcoming work.
Thank you for such a marvelous story...

Michelle
person Kittynip9
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And whata finale that was! I'm sorry to see it done, but glad you're planning on doing a follow up. That would be uber-cool! Please update "Domination" soon.
person Brazgirl
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the best het fic ever! Really... please, please write ano one one! Continue... this was soooo good!
person jw
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I like it a lot. It's was sweet, funny, and oh so NC17.

*I drop my head back to the pillows, rubbing my eyes with the heels of my hands, muttering, "Ay, sweet Eru!"

"Yes? How may I help you?"

//SHE DID NOT JUST GO THERE.// I let my hands fall away, wrinkling my nose at her. "You are simply incorrigible, but I love you anyway." She grins down at me, bouncing against my chest.*

Thas prs probably the funniest line in the whole story.
person sofia(weirdgurl32@hotmail.com)
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read about his point of view on this... so please! UPDATE SOON!!
person Miriel
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE NOW! oh wow is this fic amazing...
person Lady Undomiel
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo-hoo! all i can say is great chap, can't wait for the next, and I must compliment you on the point of view changes, they're great for the story.
person Serene Ice Mage
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this, please update soon! I can't wait to see what's in store for legolas!!
person Amazed
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shiz...PLEASE UPDATE!! This is awesome! I need to know what happens!! please!
person gothicgirl-
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good writing, i like the humor
go on
bebye