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*opens the window to let some of the suddenly extremely hot air out* Whoa. What a chapter.. Heheheeee... I can't wait to see what she'll do with Legsless now. :) So update, pwetty pwease?

Woo Hoo! Liked your review Sonia, almost as much as reading the story itself and agreth yth you about the characterisation of Legolas. Have just read chapter 8 again for the third time. I do not know wether to laugh, cry or scream. I am still twirling around the room in ecstasy. Please can I have this ELF when you have finished with him!

Please please continue this. It is the most HOT leglolas pairing I have encountered. I am totally in awe of his self control and his stamina. It is just how I imagine an ELF would be. Keep it up and i will keep reading this fic!!

Woo, that was hot. I admit I didn't think reading it from Legolas' point of view would be as good as from the girl, but man, I was wrong. Update soon!
A~R

Hey Shana! I was reading your story while listening to the song Control, by Puddle of Mudd. This music seemed to fit perfectly to Fantasy. I'm going to put them here, so you'll understand why I got to this conclusion. Maybe I'm wrong, and you don't think the same, but I would love you to listen to it anyway... Well, now that I'm thinking, maybe this song would work better in Domination... O hell, I'm starting to babble! Big hugs and keep the good work!

CONTROL

I love the way you look at me
I feel the pain you place inside
Lock me up inside ya dirty cage
While I'm alone inside my mind

I like to teach you all the rules
I'd get to see them set in stone
I like it when you chain me to the bed
There ya secrets never shone

I need to feel you
You need to feel me
I can't control you
You're not the one for me, no

I can't control you
You can't control me
I need to feel you
So why's it involve

I love the way you rape my skin
I feel the hate you place inside
I need to get your voice out of my head
Cause I'm the guy you'll never find

I'm faking all of the rules
There's no expressions on your face
I'm hoping some day you will let me go
Release me from my dirty cage

I need to feel you
You need to feel me
I can't control you
You're not the one for me, no

I can't control you
You can't control me
I need to feel you
So why's it involve... you and me...

{Repeat 4x}
I love the way you look at me
I love the way you smack my ass
I love the dirty things you do
I have control of you

I need to feel you
You need to feel me
I can't control you
You're not the one for me, no

I can't control you
You can't control me
I need to feel you
So why's it involve you and me...

{Repeat 4x}
You're not the one for me, no

OMG!!!!! That's some good SHIT! You have NO idea how happy I am that you're back and continuing your stories. I look for your stuff whenever I'm here. You are, hands down, one of my favorite fan fic. authors. I've been homeless myself once and know how much that sucks, so kudos to you, your determination and your talent. I'm also reading Domination and can't wait for you to continue that one

Whoa!!!!! That was great! Really erotic...I LOVED IT! I'm going to show it to my boyfriend...he could use a few tips :)

This story is so darn good!! I love it......you have done a wonderful job on it. By the way, when you said you were homeless at one point, I said a pray or two for you! I glad to see that everything has worked out and your able to finish some more of your story!

Hoot!! *jumps up and down* What a chapter, what a chapter!! Me likes! :D *is completely over-crazed* More chappies, pweeeeaaaaase??

damn that boy is good! going that long, self control doesn't describe it any more ;) loved it! update soon!
A~R