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by Shanastay

person Unski
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
he did cum! god, i was wonderin wut the hell was wrong with him. well, i wanna see wut she does, so UPDATE!
person Eleen
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really hot chappie;-)
I love it...hehe. More
person tacenandy
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As I finished reading this, I thought, "My God, is is so good already, what can come next?" I'm not sure I'd be up to the challenge of "Your turn..." after what's already happened in so short a span of time! Totally looking forward to the next episode!
person Lady Vendea
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm begging you with all I've got...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
person Kirah
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even if I'm the only revr (wr (which I'm not) please update! This is one of only two fanfictions that can toy with my emotions. For some reason I found myself laughing at this this chapter! Oh and how on earth do you get by with an R rating!? this is NC17! But whatever. It's not like I mind ;)
person unforgiven mistress
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when I fist opened up this story I had just got done reading a horrid Mary-sue and when I read the first lines of this I thought 'oh no another one' but as I continued reading I found my self enjoying this little fic of yours.
This is a very good fic and I hope you keep writing it.
oh right and as an afterthought, thank god he actaully cam I thought there was something wrong with him LMAO
person astonished
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your good. woah. And i thought my bf was good... i had no idea!
person GraceTace
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AACCKK!!
Woo boy...
person amanda
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ITS NICE
person RedHandedLillian
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
E! yey! please continue! so super good! post the next one!