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by Shanastay

person Thaelia15
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
legolas, an egomanac? no!(sarcasm)cookies for an abundance of elvin foreplay!
person Thaelia15
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pester pester pester pester pester. IS IT WORKING?
person Thaelia15
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
she was drunk?when was she drunk? confused...COOKIES FOR AN EXCESS OF ELF HOTNESS!
person Pixisticks
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... I wish I could help you in some way, but I don't know you. I will say a prayer to the gods to help you with this, my problems pale in comparison. Yre are an excellent writer, and that may be your freedom if you are reading this. The BEST of luck to you, shannon!
person Pickle
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*shivers* Legolas's arse...my, my, my. This little vixen really has got him where she wants him. *sigh* lucky bitch...
person Blackkat
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
Write more please! This is very good and I would love to see it continued! =^.^=
person HONEYPOM
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more, more, more. Encore! Don't stop!
person Skyler VonDetton
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! I was laughing the entire time! Lol. Its a really good ff, best Legolas/You I've read. And what the heck does he keep calling her?
person tacenandy
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo baby! I love erotic literature!
I really enjoy the his/hers POV, it makes a story like this more unique and interesting. Every girl needs foreplay like this...
person Justmebymyself
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very very talented. Yre are a great writer. WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!